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Saturday 6th September 2008 14:26

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 81

The Picnic
Okay, first off, I just love how James dwells on asking Lily or not, until Sirius takes matters into his own hands, which,I suspect, might have been for his own Marauder humor; my idea of Lily is a little bit more Hermione-ish than yours so I expected her to have a little renitence at the boys' rule-breaking habits, but your version feels natural as well.... so overall, a great, great story..Good job!
Friday 28th March 2008 21:22

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

The Picnic
awwwww!!! I loved this story!!! It was awesome!!!
haha i love how siruis was taking all those pictures
the ending was adorable!
Saturday 10th November 2007 23:17

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

The Picnic
haha i love it:p Im glad that james toned down lol
siruis taking a million pics of them that was so siruis like :p
Monday 17th July 2006 11:21

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157

The Picnic
Very romantic story
Friday 3rd March 2006 18:26

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17

The Picnic
awww cute. that was really good!
Tuesday 5th October 2004 21:17

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 162

The Picnic
AAAWWW!!!  Sirius snapping pictures was pricless
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