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ionik27 Sunday 31st August 2008 15:14 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 81
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| very nice fic! |
| gymnastgal19 Saturday 29th March 2008 14:02 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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not to bad
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| gymnastgal19 Thursday 15th November 2007 05:52 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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!!!! WOW! that was well written and i like how you made a fanfic about harry's feelings for ginny!
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| Aragog Wednesday 31st August 2005 17:24
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| Good things come in small packages. Well done
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| LunaLovegood Sunday 28th August 2005 13:29 1st year Num. of Reviews: 1
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wow, This story is (my first impulse would be awesome but... I'm going to say..... perfectly heart wrenching, I honestly don't think that you could have done anything better, it was perfect! I loved it very deep and sensitive. Thanks for sharing this with us~
~K~ |
| Delfino Saturday 27th August 2005 11:12 5th year Num. of Reviews: 238
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Oh...wow. I don't know what to say. Or how to say it. Well, guess I better try:
This is sooooo AMAZING!! It's like a poem, drifting in and out and...and....I don't know how to explain it but this was so confusing that it made sense. Does that sound right? Well, obviously not, but just know that this is wonderful work and it's no surprise to me why it's story of the week!
Delfino |
| graup_hagrid Wednesday 24th August 2005 16:21 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 89
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Very nice fic.
Short and to the point - no messing around here.
And, boy, can I relate. I'll never forget that feeling of being whole for the first time after meeting and marrying my wife.
As far as what you could do better, you might want to consider expanding Harry's musing into a ficlet that shows the 2 halves, the 1 whole, and some of the trevails to reach the state of being complementary (not complimentary).
It would also be interesting to see Ginny's musing as well, and how it would be different. |
| x_Rose_x Tuesday 23rd August 2005 03:30 1st year Num. of Reviews: 48
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| I love this. It's so different but really cool. Well done!
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| critmo Tuesday 23rd August 2005 00:48 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 684
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| Interesting style, but makes sense and is not necessarily pre-HBP. It could still come true if Harry comes to his senses. - Well done! |
| PHsname Monday 22nd August 2005 10:09 4th year Num. of Reviews: 161
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very well written...im impressed. |
| amamama Monday 22nd August 2005 09:21 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 440
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Wow... this definitely managed to convay a lot, and in less than 500
words nontheless... I'm amazed. Don't know how this is different
from usual, but I might find out soon.
"He was whole in being not one, but two." Love that one!
Thanks!
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| Arnel Monday 22nd August 2005 05:40 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 573
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Congratulations on being selected as Author of the Week. I'm off to read your other stories. |
| Arnel Monday 22nd August 2005 05:27 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 573
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| I really liked this little peek into Harry's psyche. You did a nice job of showing how his awakening feelings towards Ginny evolved over time. My favorite line is the last: it shows just what kind of magic love really holds. Good job...bravo! |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:45 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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sorry for so many reviews my laptop is playing up !
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
| Cherry Monday 22nd August 2005 04:43 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179
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WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
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