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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 15th January 2008 15:52


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Love Bombs and Bacon
awwww... thats so cute lol
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acciobook
Thursday 25th May 2006 18:15


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Love Bombs and Bacon
This was a really cute story.

It goes w/o saying I love that both my favorite couples got together, I believe my favorite part was this line:

"Mind, these are still experimental, so if you could take notes, it would help."

It is SO very Weasley twins.
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Fuzzy
Sunday 7th August 2005 17:17


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

Love Bombs and Bacon

I love this story! My favorite part was the very last sentence-

"Harry Potter's world exploded."

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levotatingT
Tuesday 12th April 2005 14:16


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

Love Bombs and Bacon

That was an awsome cliffhanger, so taht we can fill in the blanks with our own "thoughts".  BRILLIANT.I loved it.  PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!

levotatingT

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sonicdale
Monday 4th April 2005 10:27


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

Love Bombs and Bacon
Heh. even fluffier than the last one.
You have some pronoun errors in the last section. He/His.

Good idea though. Wish I could see the 'report' Harry gives to the Twins:

+++++++++++++++++
Weasley Wizarding Weezes
+++++++++++++++++
Official Field Test
Item: Love Bomb
Tester: Harry J. Potter
Date of Test: May 23, 2004
Testees Involved:
1. Minerva McGonagall
2. Ginerva Weasley
3. Ronald Weasley
4. Hermione Granger

Results:
Subject One: immediately uttered the name of her desire upon activation of the bomb. Next day's effects were noticeable in her proximity to Headmaster. Futher observations unobtainable.
Subject Two: Day after test, subject broke off relationship with current boyfriend, obtained new boyfriend. Major crush, results pending on level of emotion. Prognosis very good!
Subjects Three and Four: Spent night snogging, slept on couch entire night. Subject Three detected a smell on bomb's impact, but was overcome by effects. Both subjects firmly in each other's grasp.

Final Test Results:
Item extremely effective. Duration of spell to be explored - long term effects must be examined and recorded. No side effects reported. It is the opinion of this tester that the item be sold in very small quantities, at a high profit margin as this specific item can be very valuable.

Signed,
Harry J. Potter, WWW shareholder and tester
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