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Monday 16th December 2013 18:43

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

Love Bombs and Bacon
Tuesday 15th January 2008 15:52

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Love Bombs and Bacon
awwww... thats so cute lol
Thursday 25th May 2006 18:15

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Love Bombs and Bacon
This was a really cute story.

It goes w/o saying I love that both my favorite couples got together, I believe my favorite part was this line:

"Mind, these are still experimental, so if you could take notes, it would help."

It is SO very Weasley twins.
Sunday 7th August 2005 17:17

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

Love Bombs and Bacon

I love this story! My favorite part was the very last sentence-

"Harry Potter's world exploded."

Tuesday 12th April 2005 14:16

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

Love Bombs and Bacon

That was an awsome cliffhanger, so taht we can fill in the blanks with our own "thoughts".  BRILLIANT.I loved it.  PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!


Monday 4th April 2005 10:27

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

Love Bombs and Bacon
Heh. even fluffier than the last one.
You have some pronoun errors in the last section. He/His.

Good idea though. Wish I could see the 'report' Harry gives to the Twins:

Weasley Wizarding Weezes
Official Field Test
Item: Love Bomb
Tester: Harry J. Potter
Date of Test: May 23, 2004
Testees Involved:
1. Minerva McGonagall
2. Ginerva Weasley
3. Ronald Weasley
4. Hermione Granger

Subject One: immediately uttered the name of her desire upon activation of the bomb. Next day's effects were noticeable in her proximity to Headmaster. Futher observations unobtainable.
Subject Two: Day after test, subject broke off relationship with current boyfriend, obtained new boyfriend. Major crush, results pending on level of emotion. Prognosis very good!
Subjects Three and Four: Spent night snogging, slept on couch entire night. Subject Three detected a smell on bomb's impact, but was overcome by effects. Both subjects firmly in each other's grasp.

Final Test Results:
Item extremely effective. Duration of spell to be explored - long term effects must be examined and recorded. No side effects reported. It is the opinion of this tester that the item be sold in very small quantities, at a high profit margin as this specific item can be very valuable.

Harry J. Potter, WWW shareholder and tester
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