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starkid
Thursday 27th October 2011 11:59
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4
| The Abyss |
| oh my god I am bawling my eyes out. To hear about Harry Potter being reduced to a shell of his former self, and that Dumbledore caused it all. You truly are a master of writing |
| Life Shadower
Sunday 10th July 2011 23:27
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | The Abyss |
I just... Wow... I'm a guy, and as you know the stereotypical "guys don't cry" thing has been a stigma on me since I've grown up. This story though... Is something that can make me open up and feel emotionally distressed... I think you drove your point home with this story... As much as "This Means War!" brings happiness and joy to me, this story really crushed a lot of my hopes and dreams... I've read a lot of fan fiction regarding a happy life for Harry and Ginny (although rather bittersweet ends of life), but I have not read something where their life is so abruptly taken away...
Don't take this as harsh criticism or any form of bashing though... As defeated as I feel after reading this, I can only admit one thing after reading all your stories posted so far: You are an amazing writer.
Thank you for making your works public. I have enjoyed reading your masterpieces. |
| ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 10th March 2010 20:46
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 257 | The Abyss |
| Omg! Dumbledore the bad guy - who would have thought? It was a very well-written story, and extremely sad. Nice job! |
| saulick
Friday 16th October 2009 10:55
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | The Abyss |
| disturbing but very well written. Maybe the most thought provoking short story I ever read. |
| Pondering
Saturday 25th July 2009 21:03
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | The Abyss |
OMG THIS STORY IS GOLD!!! Jeconais is a genius! Jeconais is a genius!  |
| Dad
Saturday 6th June 2009 10:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 464 | The Abyss |
| I thought that was horrible - but so well written, |
| Dad
Tuesday 2nd June 2009 13:19
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 464 | The Abyss |
| That was absolutely horrible and depressing. Great bit of writing though. |
| GinevraMollyWeasley
Wednesday 7th January 2009 16:54
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67 | The Abyss |
OK, i really liked it, but it was really sad! i liked the bit at the end with Snape...  |
| pokos
Sunday 23rd November 2008 19:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | The Abyss |
| Good work! I always thought that Dumbledore sacrificed a bit too much for the sake of the greater good. Thanks for story, hope you keep writing more. |
| craste
Saturday 16th August 2008 16:46
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | The Abyss |
| u really have a way with words....again the story was amazing |
| GreenAngel
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 18:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | The Abyss |
My god... I've read some good fan-fiction in my time, but this was truly exquisite. Although, to be honest, I don't like what you did with Dumbledore. You let him off FAR TOO EASILY. But, this was a truly amazing piece of work.
Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| pyromain
Saturday 30th June 2007 04:43
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | The Abyss |
| the story was really dark, I can't say I really liked it but have to say that it was good to read it. Another grave misstake by dumbeldore. |
| DanAngelus
Wednesday 2nd May 2007 13:40
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 133 | The Abyss |
| This is a really good short story. Well written. You captured the "emotion" (or lack thereof) of it all really well. This is the second of your short stories ive read and I really like them both. Well done. |
| PhoenixFire
Monday 25th December 2006 01:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18 | The Abyss |
OMG! This was so sad! *Sniff*
Man, you're a great writer but really...
How could you make a story so SAD?!
... When I first read it, (I read it like, over and over again)
it was kinda hard to understand what was happening cuz of
all of your other "happy" stories.
But, as I kept on reading, I had a horrible feeling as I
dove further through the story.
You have a very wonderful talent at writing stories,
and maybe you can become a real author one day!
~ PhoenixFire ~ |
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Saturday 27th May 2006 15:45
| The Abyss |
Plz finnish "This means war!" not finnishing it is pishing everyone off! we dont care if its not what happend in HBP its YOUR story we want so badly!
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| Ari
Sunday 6th November 2005 23:59
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35 | The Abyss |
| *sniff* That is so sad. Great telling, Jeconais. Beaut. |
| ridgeback77
Wednesday 31st August 2005 19:23
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | The Abyss |
That was great. I'm sorry that both Harry and Ginny both died, too Romeo & Juliet-ish
for me personally, but a great story nonetheless. I did have a
huge grin on my face when Harry ended the Malfoy line though.
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| J.R. Lewis
Wednesday 3rd August 2005 23:55
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 125 | The Abyss |
Powerful. And that's putting it mildly!
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| BasketKiwi
Monday 1st August 2005 18:04
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | The Abyss |
| Wow. Once again, wow. That was really good. It was horribly sad, but really good. Aw. Poor Harry. That part was evil. Actually, the whole thing was evil, except when Ginny and Harry get to be together again! Very, very good job! Yes, you certainly do know how to write a short story, and as far as I can tell, you certainly do remember how to write angst. |
| malko050987
Saturday 9th July 2005 01:46
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29 | The Abyss |
It's a sad story, yes, but it has a happy ending. Well, most people would argue with me on the "Happy ending" bit, but it's true. For me, a happy end of a HP fanfic, is when Harry gets Ginny and they live hapily ever after.
You gave me that. Thank you. |
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