Harry and Neville get to clean up a horrible mess and then Neville finds out that his gran is missing. I am proud of Neville that he wasn't worried about their house but was worried about his gran. I am glad Dumbledore sent Harry and Neville up to their dorm. Of course Snape will probably say some stupid thing about them getting out of detention. Not for a good reason though. Even Snape has to see that. Thanks for writing. i look forward to more of this story.
Never thought of Harry AND Neville in Advanced Potions - good idea. So far Neville feels nicely in character.
Yeah, an attack on Neville's house! Not that I'm for it, but it must be expected given what a bother Neville was at the DoM.
Surely the person with the highest score on the Herbology O.W.L. in over twenty years. Go Neville! The apprenticeship with Sprout seems a bit odd. Could you fill it out a bit more? Have others had similiar apprenticeships with other professors? Is it a formal position?
Okay, now I'm confused. I've definately read this chapter before. But not on Phoenix Song. But I hadn't read the prologue and the first chapter before. Where else are you posted at? Anyway, I loved it the first time and I do again. I'm just puzzled. Kelley
no! Poor Neville! *fingers crossed for his gran* I really hope
you don't do anything too cruel... Your characterisations are spot on
perfect, and I love your descriptive detail. You put in those little
fact that make a story seem much more like a reality! Well done
Aggiebell Tuesday 9th November 2004 11:16
2: Let the Fun Begin (Author Response)
*Grin* It made my day to hear that you like my descriptive dedetails, since that's one of the things that I'm totally in awe over in your writing!