i really enjoy this idea, but it was a bit to fast and i would like to know more, I'm not really sure what is going on and what the every one thinks of it, more thoughts would be nice. even so i really like it and cant wait to read more!!!!!
Interesting so far. This is going to be H/G right? Jenna is just too much like Ginny (physically, at least, and then with the date-of-sorts in London) for my comfort. I love elves!
Wow! I read your story earlier on schnoogle. It seemed that you had given up on it, but, lo and behold, i come to look for some stories here, and i see yours! IT was really a great chapter. I do think that you're kind of letting it get a bit choppy. But that's easily forgiven. I hail you for a job well done! I hope you continue this.