i really enjoy this idea, but it was a bit to fast and i would like to know more, I'm not really sure what is going on and what the every one thinks of it, more thoughts would be nice. even so i really like it and cant wait to read more!!!!!
I was reading this story at FF.NET and guess what? The server broke down.. Good chapter. Very imaginative. This second chapter is fast paced. The first, is balanced and just right.
Ahh!!
Harry-super-power fic!
Interesting so far. This is going to be H/G right? Jenna is just too much like Ginny (physically, at least, and then with the date-of-sorts in London) for my comfort. I love elves!
Wow! I read your story earlier on schnoogle. It seemed that you had given up on it, but, lo and behold, i come to look for some stories here, and i see yours! IT was really a great chapter. I do think that you're kind of letting it get a bit choppy. But that's easily forgiven. I hail you for a job well done! I hope you continue this.
I hope you continue this.