I'm glad to hear that about Remus!! Great opening chapter! I love the way you have written the relationship between the Maurauders, you've definitely captured the easy, comfortable camaraderie they have with each other.
This is a good beginning. I like the interaction between the boys and Lily. Peter is a real non-entity in this so far. I look forward to more of this story. What is the "whine" that James noticed? I look forward to finding out. p
A good beginning. I like the characters so far. Of course Peter is going to be a problem later so I don't have to like where he is coming from. I look forward to the next chapter. What is the whine they hear? Who or what is attacking? Thanks for writing. p
Excellent chapter! I don't usually like Marauder tales, and am sorry to say that I put off reading this one because I don't feel I know enough about Lily and James' characters to really be in the story, if that makes sense. You've managed to make them real for me from the get go and I'm liking the tension between Lily and James, Wormtail's avoidance of Lily, the tension between Sirius and Remus has me curious and I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter to solve that cliff hanger!
Itís really pathetic, I havenít read any of your fanfiction. Till just now! Even though I know that you have been writing since I can remember. Anywho just wanted to say that I love reading your fanfiction canít wait to see what happens in the falling chapter!
By the I would like to inform you that I do indeed know you, but I donít think that you can think of my name UmmÖ well let me give you a hint. Latin Lover! Does that ring a bell?
Shinou (who is too lazy to log in) Sunday 4th July 2004 06:36
Aw! Creep free Remus, just what I've always wanted. So yeah, I am finally reading this. It's by chance really, I just happened to get a happy brithday PM and came here to look at it and one of the first things I see is Lady Chi ^_^ Figured I should check it out. Woo hoo for overly long sentences.
Anyway, cute really. I just want to hug them all... sans Peter... yeah. Ja ne!
I, as a small few are aware, am a closet Lily/James addict. I must say, this is my favourite story by you yet! I'll be keeping an eye out for updates! Gotta run, Mother will come after me with a blunt object of some sort if I don't mow the lawn before sundown...
A great beginning to a promising fic. I normally don't ready MWPP-era fics, but your characterizations are very compelling and the plot has already hooked me on the first chapter. I don't even know if there is a plot yet! LOL!
Lady Chi Thursday 17th June 2004 19:10
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That's quite a feat, you know, to be hooked on a plot you aren't entirely sure exists! LOL! I assure you, there is one. I'm going to have to go out and find it, but I'm sure there is one.
oww i love lily and james storys, this sounds like it is shaping up to be a good one. i liked the tentions between sirius and remus, and how peter is so...small (in stature and personality)great job i hope you update soon, i am eager for more.
Yeah!! Lady Chi is writing again!! I love the start of this story. I can't wait to read more. I haven't read many J/L stories in the past, but I do love the way you have them all characterized. Well done!!
Lady Chi Thursday 17th June 2004 09:34
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I was surprised at the number of people who remarked on the characterization of Lily/James and the Marauders. I had thought that people would like more tension between them, but honestly, I just couldn't see it that way.
I'm hoping to hear from you again, soon! Your reviews mean the world.