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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 06:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

An Eye For Art
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 06:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

An Eye For Art
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 06:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

An Eye For Art
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 06:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

An Eye For Art
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 06:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

An Eye For Art
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 6th November 2007 15:01


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

An Eye For Art
awww i really liked this! what kinds of flashes??? fireworks or camera?

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pyromain
Monday 3rd September 2007 09:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

An Eye For Art
loved it, wondering how took the pictures. Gues it would be the twins.
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lacyrachil
Tuesday 12th December 2006 12:16


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

An Eye For Art
So...the flashes...Rita Skeeter, possibly? What a snake. Great writing!
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daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 15th September 2006 14:43


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

An Eye For Art
Nice. Where those photografers? However you spell it. But very good.
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ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 27th February 2006 19:12


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

An Eye For Art
The art thing was a little weird but I loved their kiss. Really creative though. And for the third time, great story.
Kortnee
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Anonomous
Sunday 25th December 2005 22:18


An Eye For Art
Sweet story, but were the flashes?
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Jamie
Thursday 1st September 2005 17:12


An Eye For Art

I like the idea of Ginny being an artist, for some reason it seems to suit her very well. I also adore Harry's awkwardness and shyness in this one.. very good.

XOXO,

Jamie

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DADAGinny
Tuesday 16th November 2004 15:40


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

An Eye For Art
I loved how she got him to at least try to paint!  Very Fluffy!  I also liked your comment about locking up Ron and Hermione!  They definately need it!


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Thursday 11th November 2004 23:09


An Eye For Art

!

cowgirl1995@mail.net

p.s. lol

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Rachel
Thursday 11th November 2004 23:02


An Eye For Art

I  LOVED IT.

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Rachel
Thursday 11th November 2004 22:59


An Eye For Art

it!

  and    will  make  a  grat  cople   !

 

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Rachel
Thursday 11th November 2004 22:51


An Eye For Art

 

 

I  LOVED IT.

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pixiellie
Monday 11th October 2004 11:02


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77

An Eye For Art
Another sweet, interesting read.  I like the idea of Ginny as artistic.  All that fun and passion I picture her with would need an outlet besides quidditch and pranks, she's not a copy of the twins. 
Great line with "'Perfect' for Harry meant having his friends close and his enemies out of his head."  Out of his head not thinking of them, or not being possessed by them? 
Nice to see Harry as the one tied up in knots about his feelings, rather than Ginny.  You create an idylic setting, a perfect moment out of time.  Great imagry of Harry's response to Ginny, right down to the need to kiss her again to prove it's real. 
The flashes going off around them make me nervous though.  Please don't let the twins have a camera.  Grin.
Great job, a fun, fluffy story with a satisfying payoff for the reader.  I can't wait to read more.

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NightBird
Monday 21st June 2004 15:05


An Eye For Art
Hey, nice. I needed something sensless and fluffy. I look forward to any additional posts.
Mr. Intel
Monday 21st June 2004 15:05
An Eye For Art (Author Response)
I'm glad so many people like fluff! There's more on the horizon with a bit more angst this time. I hope you like.
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Musings
Sunday 20th June 2004 21:49


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 98

An Eye For Art
Fluff! Fluff! Kissy, fluffy fluff! I just love it!! Michael, you did such a great job in capturing the warmth of the day, the sharing of the experience. Just wonderful -- on to the next chapter!
Mr. Intel
Sunday 20th June 2004 21:49
An Eye For Art (Author Response)
:blush: Thanks bunches, Chele.
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