I like the idea of Ginny being an artist, for some reason it seems to suit her very well. I also adore Harry's awkwardness and shyness in this one.. very good.
Another sweet, interesting read. I like the idea of Ginny as
artistic. All that fun and passion I picture her with would need
an outlet besides quidditch and pranks, she's not a copy of the
twins.
Great line with "'Perfect' for Harry meant having his friends close and
his enemies out of his head." Out of his head not thinking of
them, or not being possessed by them?
Nice to see Harry as the one tied up in knots about his feelings,
rather than Ginny. You create an idylic setting, a perfect moment
out of time. Great imagry of Harry's response to Ginny, right
down to the need to kiss her again to prove it's real.
The flashes going off around them make me nervous though. Please don't let the twins have a camera. Grin.
Great job, a fun, fluffy story with a satisfying payoff for the reader. I can't wait to read more.
Fluff! Fluff! Kissy, fluffy fluff! I just love it!! Michael, you did such a great job in capturing the warmth of the day, the sharing of the experience. Just wonderful -- on to the next chapter!
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