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Reviews For Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss by Mr. Intel

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Tuesday 6th November 2007 15:09

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Molly's Best Berries
haha so cute

Monday 3rd September 2007 10:16

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Molly's Best Berries
Molly would be proud, I'm betting she is al ready planning the wedding.
Tuesday 12th December 2006 12:39

6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

Molly's Best Berries
How sweet (no pun intended)! Great story, I can't wait to read more.
Friday 15th September 2006 14:45

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

Molly's Best Berries
Those where deffanatly her best berries. Haha. Very good.
Monday 27th February 2006 19:15

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

Molly's Best Berries
Loved all the fluff and Harry's reactions to her different movements and everything. Also liked Mrs. Weasley's reaction to them not coming in in a reasonable amount of time. Loved it!
Thursday 1st September 2005 17:14

Molly's Best Berries

Harry freaking out over Ginny licking her lips, and Harry feeding Ginny berries, definately the makings of a wonderful first-kiss story. I adore the ending section with Mrs. Weasley... I really love her character, she's just so fun! Another great first kiss story. I also like the Ron-Ginny interaction in the beginning, very good example of a brother-sister relationship, I know I'm alot like that with my brothers and I'm sure I've said the "I'm blind!" Line multiple times ;)




Sunday 7th August 2005 18:24

Molly's Best Berries
i love it when authors write both POV's from & im lovin it like mcdonalds! keep up the good work!!!!!!!WRITE MORE
Tuesday 16th November 2004 15:41

6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

Molly's Best Berries
I love Molly!  She sees so much!  What a wonderful mum!

Monday 11th October 2004 11:18

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77

Molly's Best Berries
I loved it.  This was different, in that it actually made me, well, blush a little.  Grin.  Harry was kind of smooth there, even if he was afraid.  I laughed at the second sweetest line.  I'm pretty sure that would only work on a teenaged girl. 

Great job of capturing an older brother teasing his sister about a crush.  Felt very real.  Harry's reaction to Ginny in the berry patch was funny, cute and believable.  And there isn't much better than a ripe red strawberry, especially sun warmed. 
My favorite line was " Sweet Merlin. She doesn't know." Hee. Poor Harry and his hormones.  All in all, a wonderful short story.  You  created a sexy feel without going into a lot of detail.  My thanks to you for sharing your imagination, it takes courage to let others see your work.  And send my thanks to your betas as well.  You all did a wonderful job. your fan, ellie
Monday 21st June 2004 20:06

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

Molly's Best Berries
yay for fluff!
Monday 21st June 2004 15:44

Molly's Best Berries
Fluffy beyond compare! But it's so sweet everyone will go 'awww!' Very well done, dude!
Monday 21st June 2004 00:33

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42

Molly's Best Berries
Very cute and fluffy - I enjoyed it a lot

Mr. Intel
Monday 21st June 2004 00:33
Molly's Best Berries (Author Response)
Your review means a lot, Tim! I hope you'll like the next installment (coming soon to an upload queue near you).
Sunday 20th June 2004 21:57

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Molly's Best Berries
*goopy smile* Just wonderful!
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