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hihavaniceda
Monday 15th December 2008 04:13
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 184
| Now A Stranger |
mm nice one !  |
| purple_dust
Wednesday 12th December 2007 16:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Now A Stranger |
amazin story! great insight on petunia.  luved it!! |
| xDancesWithRainx
Sunday 8th July 2007 08:26
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Now A Stranger |
| Wow.....I like. I like a lot. It isn't the very best story like this I've written, but definatley better than many i've read. I like it... |
| ~delusion~
Monday 7th May 2007 00:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 19 | Now A Stranger |
that's so sad 
oh well good story, can't wait to see what's next. |
| sonicdale
Monday 21st March 2005 13:10
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510 | Now A Stranger |
Here it is, a whole year later, and it's not continued.
What happened?? This was sooo good, with a lot of promise.
I lked the irrational thinking. I liked the "SuperMum" and the "my flowers".... You've done some thinking and such. Good job.
so...
A year has gone by. Has the muse kicked itself back onto your keyboard yet? |
Alena
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 18:15 | Now A Stranger (Author Response) |
It was never supposed to be continued. The "To Be Continued..." was tagged on as a mistake by whoever uploaded this story.
I've had many plot bunnies take hold and pass in the past year. Hopefully something will blossom into something more someday soon  |
| Kelleypen
Saturday 5th February 2005 09:00
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416 | Now A Stranger |
| Thank you for showing me how to feel sympathy for Petunia. I've never wanted to hug her before now. Well done. |
| Pronglet
Thursday 3rd February 2005 17:05
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Now A Stranger |
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| lissabee
Wednesday 2nd February 2005 16:45
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 62 | Now A Stranger |
| That was a very interesting PoV...I think many people like to think of the Dursley's as having no human emotion really, but you have to wonder if Petunia had ALWAYS hated Lily or what. I think this was a very sad, but touching insight to the battle that could wage within her. |
| mary-v
Wednesday 2nd February 2005 08:18
| Now A Stranger |
Alright then! the To be continued was a nice touch, now that i know that there isnt anymore- I should have realise dit was the end , when harry moved out. Well, I hope to read more from you soon!
~Maria~ |
| Arnel
Tuesday 1st February 2005 00:42
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 573 | Now A Stranger |
You've done a remarkable job of explaining why Petunia Dursley is the way she is. You've captured her resentment of Lily's gifts beautifully which goes a long way in explaining her treatment of Harry.
By the way, congratulations for having your story selected as a Story of the Week. I will be looking for your name on the updates list from now on!
 Arnel |
Alena
Tuesday 1st February 2005 23:52 | Now A Stranger (Author Response) |
I'm completely blown away and honored and so surprised to see my name at the top of my screen for Story of the Week!
I'm so glad you enjoyed! |
| Lakshmi Potter
Monday 31st January 2005 15:48
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | Now A Stranger |
Bravo! In so few words, you've expertly filled in the gaps that I've always been frustrated that JKR didn't. And what I really like is how you've breathed life into Petunia. It was such a short piece but you found some way to make her multidimensional.
As a side note, your rendering of young Lily reminds me very much of Ginny in PS and CoS. 
~Lakshmi |
| mary-v
Monday 31st January 2005 14:09
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494 | Now A Stranger |
 Oh my God! This- this was absolutely brilliant ! For the first tiem I felt a sort os symnpathy towards Perunia, except I still don;t understand why she hates Lily so much. Well, I do , but it's still a little fuzzy. But poor Lily. Imagine getting so much, but at the expense of losing something so important. The way you characterized the Evans was absolutely brilliant. Lily suffering just like Harry, Petunia protecting her, her mother wanting the best for her, her dad being proud. I just have one small insignificant flaw to mention. Petunia said her parent s where so proud when she received her letter. So I'm guessing her mom wanted her daughter to go as much as her dad. Well, I can't wait for the second installement! Please update soon!
~Maria~ |
Alena
Tuesday 1st February 2005 23:50 | Now A Stranger (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you enjoyed! As it goes, however, this story was really a one-shot fic and they tagged "To be continued..." on the end as an oversight -- that's really the end!
I might try to continue it another time, but as you may have noticed I've been having a bit of writer's block since May when I posted this :).
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| Nundu
Monday 31st January 2005 05:39
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50 | Now A Stranger |
| It's the beginning, not the end! Hurrah! You have a lovely style and I look forward to the story continuing. |
| Kewii
Monday 14th June 2004 07:08
| Now A Stranger |
an interesting analysis of Lily's and Petunia's relationship.
I like the idea of Petunia being the protector. It's something that's fresh, yet it makes sense.
My one gripe is that I couldn't really see the future petunia in her younger self. Maybe I just missed it though.
Nice work
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| callie
Wednesday 9th June 2004 22:20
| Now A Stranger |
i really liked this. especially the last bit when petunia says harry saves the world or so shes told. excellent job! |
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