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pyromain
Friday 10th August 2007 15:53


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Regret
so sad but yet so beautifull, I really liked it. And it is one of Harry's trademarks to blame him self for what happens to other persons.
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Lily Flower
Wednesday 21st February 2007 14:32


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144

Regret
How very sweet. I don't know if its ever been said but I will--Harry is a bloody idiot. And he's slow. Very slow. But still such a great character. Good job. Now on to the other stories!
Cera
Sunday 4th March 2007 20:36
Regret (Author Response)
Yes, he's a really great character, and an idiot at times. Tis why we love him. Thanks again!
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lacyrachil
Tuesday 12th December 2006 10:21


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

Regret
Hey. I've already reviewed this but just wanted to add to some previous posters comments...you really do a good job of catching the correct characterization of the characters (too much alliteration, i know)...just wanted to congratulate you on that talent.
Cera
Sunday 4th March 2007 20:37
Regret (Author Response)
And thanks again. Characterizations are so tough, because everyone has an interpretation. I'm glad you think I've done them justice.
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lacyrachil
Tuesday 12th December 2006 09:56


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

Regret
Breathtaking. Just great. I really enjoy your work.
Cera
Sunday 4th March 2007 20:36
Regret (Author Response)
Wow, thanks.
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BasketKiwi
Tuesday 2nd August 2005 22:50


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233

Regret
+ ! Aww! And + + +  rapping Harry on the head! Yeah, Moody, you better knock some sense into him!! Hee-hee  Sorry, I just love these smileys. Great job. I loved it. So evil at the beginning, but so sweet at the end. *tear*  Good work with the story!!
Cera
Wednesday 3rd August 2005 06:47
Regret (Author Response)
Thanks!  Love your use of smileys :D
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ninkenate
Tuesday 2nd August 2005 05:35


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144

Regret
That was just so good. I went from feeling sorry for Harry, to wanting to slap him, to cheering him on. It invoked so many emotions in a short time. It is so hard to get readers to identify with one emotion through a character but you did it with several emotions. Good job.
Cera
Wednesday 3rd August 2005 06:42
Regret (Author Response)
Thanks again!  I put Harry through the ringer on this one, but I think he needs that every so often.
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Fuzzy
Monday 1st August 2005 00:43


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

Regret
Awwwwwwwwwwww.
Cera
Wednesday 3rd August 2005 06:40
Regret (Author Response)
Thanks :)
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Wild Magelet
Thursday 24th February 2005 22:53


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 115

Regret
I agree with the review comment that you made about Harry being far more likely than Ron to push away someone he cared about. Ron coming from a more stable family background, and growing up surrounded by love, would reinforce that. It's hard to imagine how guilty Harry would feel if someone he had strong romantic feelings for was hurt. I think you did a fantastic job with this fic. A withdrawn, guilt-ridden Harry is far more believable to me in this situation than a (possibly more romantic, but probably less realistic) Harry who would rush to Ginny's bedside. Terrific writing.
Cera
Saturday 26th February 2005 10:40
Regret (Author Response)

Thanks so much for your comments.  It's nice when my own thoughts are validated by others.  I think that the whole idea of love would be such a foreign concept for Harry that he would have problems dealing with it.  While I love to read (and write) the stories where Harry is carefree and accepting of love, it's fun to write stories where he's not.  Exploring all the possibilities is what makes fanfiction so great.

Thanks again for your thoughts.

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jabarber69
Saturday 20th November 2004 19:36


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 38

Regret

Whoa!, you do have a way with emotional feelings and putting them on paper. that was good. All the stories I have read on all the different sites concerning hp, gw and rw,hg and they share thier feelings, while being extemely good, and knowing that they are just stories, fanfiction. I personally cant really relate to either harry or ron being so bloody ignorant or just plain stupid enough to push thier love for their soulmates away thinking they can protect her. man they are stupid. I would rather spend 10 mins, hour, 2 hours a day, month whatever with the woman/girl of my dreams that loved me back then spend a lifetime without or worse push her away so much that she finally does leave and find someone else.

Sorry about that, just had to get it off my chest. you stories is really good though, I might not be able to relate to the characters sometimes, but I still like reading the stories....

Cera
Wednesday 24th November 2004 10:01
Regret (Author Response)

Thanks for this review as well!

I can totally agree with you.  It seems silly to give up something that would make you happy (for the most part).  I don't see Ron ever pushing Hermione away, but Harry's a different story.  I'm not sure how he would be, honestly, whether he'll embrace love, or push it away.  I like to write stories using various outcomes, since in my mind, they're all plausible.

I'm glad you liked the emotion, since it was for an angst contest.

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DADAGinny
Tuesday 16th November 2004 17:56


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

Regret
So sad, so sweet!  Very good ending.


Cera
Wednesday 24th November 2004 09:57
Regret (Author Response)
Thank so much!
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Max
Friday 29th October 2004 13:48


Regret

Oh wow!

That's so ... so ... I don't know what to say!

You captured Harry so well! Wow!

Cera
Wednesday 24th November 2004 09:57
Regret (Author Response)
Thanks Max!  I'm glad that you liked me Harry in this story.
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PenelopeBlack
Saturday 10th July 2004 13:57


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

Regret
This is an absolutely beautiful piece of work. The story seems so real and raw. Harry's characterisations are absolutely perfect. It seems like I'm reading something J.K.R. wrote herself. And, trust me, I don't throw that compliment around lightly. You created a perfect blend of angst and romance. I love the way you built up the story gradually. Very effective. The end was also fabulous. Thanks for writing this.
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Katieay
Wednesday 7th July 2004 20:40


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Regret
This was brilliant. Your characterisations, especially your suffering-unfound-guilt Harry and have-to-push-everyone-away Harry, were fantastic and you totally had me sucked in from the very start.

Not to mention the relationship between Harry and Hermione, very sibling-ish and real
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Mirax_Terrik
Thursday 1st July 2004 22:40


Regret
That was so sweet. Of all the Ginny-and-Harry-confess-their-feelings-to-each-other scenes that's one of this is one of the best angsty ones! Thanks for sharing!!
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Crookedhalo
Wednesday 30th June 2004 22:55


Regret
This was awesome! It was just a wonderfully written story.
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Hev
Wednesday 30th June 2004 17:54


Regret
Awwww so cute. Loved it!! You really are a talented writer!!
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Mr. Intel
Tuesday 29th June 2004 14:48


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80

Regret
Wow. That was the most powerful entry by far. Poor Harry, though! Stupid, stupid boy.

Well done.
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Lady Chi
Saturday 26th June 2004 21:12


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64

Regret
Why, oh why, oh why did it have to be angst? Any other sort of genre would be better! Here I am, not entirely emotionally recovered from the last fic I read, and here you come through with this fic that has me in tears!!!

Well done. Well written. Very enjoyable.
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Gillian
Saturday 26th June 2004 18:02


Regret
AWESOME!! Aww poor Harry, Ginny's so sweet, ha ha I love Harry and Ron fights, too bad Harry didn't win. Ah well! Awesome job! Ginny's so sweet!
Great job!!
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p0tterfan
Saturday 26th June 2004 00:30


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

Regret
Something that drastic would probably cause Harry to admit something

Well written.
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