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pyromain
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 13:37
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580
| Someday |
| PTSD, something some of us worry about. Thanks for writing it, I think its good to write about it in a different setting. |
| Lyras
Tuesday 2nd May 2006 18:33
| Someday |
| This is very painful, all the more so because it strikes me as very plausible. Beautifully written – I can almost feel the chains that the war has laid on them all. This story was recced to me by r_becca (beccafran), and the rec was well-deserved – thank you! |
| Wench
Monday 1st May 2006 05:52
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Someday |
| Very lovely story. Very realistic. I do hope Harry doesn't have this to deal with when the series are over. If he does though Ginny will be there for him. Again, very heart-breaking. |
| HPfanatic378
Sunday 12th March 2006 21:23
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Someday |
That's amazing! Great work, I'm just blown away by all the emotion and how real the characters are. |
| Cherry
Monday 14th November 2005 10:28
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179 | Someday |
Very powerful. It could be made into a poem--One that is all about feeling.
Cherry xxx |
| SillyGillie
Tuesday 18th October 2005 17:15
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Someday |
| Nice job. Poor Harry. I'm glad he admitted something was wrong. Him and Ginny can sort out anything together. : ) |
| Anni
Monday 15th August 2005 12:50
| Someday |
This story was amazingly written. I absolutely loved it!
~Anni |
| DADAGinny
Thursday 3rd March 2005 19:42
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277 | Someday |
You do such a good job of writing about people's emotions and having it
so believable. I love how you talked about Post Traumatic stress
after the battle. What an excellent job.
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| StarDreamer
Wednesday 2nd March 2005 19:19
| Someday |
Wow. Simply wonderful and moving. Great job. Hope to see more! |
| Narumi
Monday 28th February 2005 19:07
| Someday |
| Oh, I cried on this one. I have a friend who's just returned from Iraq, and another who's just left for Iraq... Wow. You're so very talented. Please let me know of any other works you have done. |
| Mr. Intel
Wednesday 16th February 2005 15:26
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Someday |
Jen recc'd this on CrackBroom and I thought I'd give it a try.
I find it amazing how certain, poignant emotions can be so effeciently
transported from writer to reader. You've a gift for it and I
hope that you use it more often.
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| a reader
Thursday 10th February 2005 08:09
| Someday |
This had a nice focus on the reality of war. Just change a few things and it could be about any actual soldier returning from Iraq etc. I liked how you showed it all from Ginny's perspective, and how she stayed so strong for him. Its obviously a tough relationship, but she just wanted to stick it through. Thanks.
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| parakletos
Thursday 16th December 2004 03:41
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 209 | Someday |
| Found this through a fic rec list from Jenadamson, and I'm glad I did. A powerful piece of writing.
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| brad
Wednesday 15th December 2004 21:24
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136 | Someday |
| Excellent. Thank you very much for this. I'm going to have
to re-read it several times just to discern the various 'phases' that
Harry and his wife experience in this story - I'm sure I didn't catch
it all the first time through. But first I'll read your other
work! Thank you again.
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| Fievel
Wednesday 8th December 2004 16:35
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Someday |
| Ooohhh break my heart. Lovely, very lovely. |
| joviality
Wednesday 8th December 2004 05:00
| Someday |
| Very emotional, very real.. |
| Anki
Monday 11th October 2004 10:58
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Someday |
Ms. Lynch,
I just finished reading the stories you have archived here at PhoenixSong.net, and I wanted to tell you that I think your writing is beautiful. It's not just the words you've chosen or how you've strung them together that creates this beauty, it's the emotions and images that rise from them. I wish I could explain better, in a way that would show you the wonderful, and heartbreaking, experience it has been reading what you've written. Your stories (especially "Someday") will stay with me a long while, making me wish I could create magic with words as well.
I hope to read more of your writing in the future. |
| Tosca
Wednesday 14th July 2004 22:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25 | Someday |
This always gets me. I'm just stunned at how well you capture the turmoil of both Harry and Ginny; it's breathtaking and heart-wrenching. Just a bittersweet, beautiful tale.  |
| PottyMalf_13
Wednesday 9th June 2004 12:45
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6 | Someday |
| I liked it, but truthfully I was a little confused. I dont know why exactly, but I did get confused. other than that I thought it was good... It kept my attention. |
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