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webster
Tuesday 13th April 2010 13:30


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 56

Forget Me Not
Nice story!
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gymnastgal19
Friday 5th October 2007 13:05


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Forget Me Not
wow! nice story! I'm thinking that you wanted us to think that ron was dead and then it turned out that his memory was just obliviated like lockharts lol
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Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 24th April 2007 03:44


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132

Forget Me Not
Brilliant. Really sweet. I think Ron's recovery was a bit too abrubt, but the story is really good.

Great job
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Uzamaki-girl
Sunday 17th September 2006 18:37


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Forget Me Not
This was sweet.^^
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Hoss
Sunday 16th July 2006 20:32


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Forget Me Not
Well done. Thanks
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sas
Monday 17th January 2005 13:24


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14

Forget Me Not

beautiful story!

 almost had me crying a little at the start!

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Jenna
Thursday 16th December 2004 18:48


Forget Me Not

I thought he was DEAD! I almost cried. Well, I did kinda cry. Anyway, I was happy to see it was just a memory charm ... ohh, angsty fluffiness ...

I love it.

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bluejeanphoenix
Tuesday 30th November 2004 23:37


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10

Forget Me Not

 

I love this so much.

 

Into my favorites it goes!

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jabarber69
Tuesday 23rd November 2004 23:54


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 38

Forget Me Not
that was good, I was hoping in the end he would get his memory back. you handled that quite well. thank you....
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HisGirl
Saturday 10th July 2004 12:44


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10

Forget Me Not
Hey! Look I'm sorry for not reading or reviewing it sooner. You know me...or at least I hope you do! It's okay that you didn't win but I got to hand it to you, you were the only person who did Ron/Hermione summer/angst. It's a little harder to compete when all the rest of the writers/readers prefer H/G. You know, I still believe you should of won, it was really really, I mean like really, brilliant. And sometimes I hate you because you have better writing/grammer skills than I do! (But I still love you don't worry ) Continue to write smashing good stories Mate and knock them all dead next time. I know you can! -HisGirl
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RdeHwyll
Wednesday 7th July 2004 12:24


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 36

Forget Me Not
Excellent telling -- Very well done!
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Aibhinn
Monday 5th July 2004 17:19


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 46

Forget Me Not
Excellent story! Completely in-character, and truly angst--poor Ron, unable to remember things; and even worse for Hermione and Harry at the beginning, at least, when they knew what he should know, what he had been like...

Very, very nice job.
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Misty
Sunday 4th July 2004 19:39


Forget Me Not
Ahhh... such sweetness.

Ron and Hermione holding handsesssss... we liked that, didn't we, Precious?



The Weasley Clock line... heartbreaking, but brilliant.

Thanks for the great read - this is my choice for the winner.

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Cera
Sunday 4th July 2004 12:03


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64

Forget Me Not
This is such a great short. It's unique, angsty, and heartwarming all at once.
"Arguing isn't helping anyone," Harry interjected. "Just forget it guys, all right?"
"That won't be hard for me," Ron said. "At least I'm good at something."

That line broke my heart! Poor Ron. You wrote the beginning so well, hinting at what happened. Brilliant work.
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Spasmodic Dust Bunny
Saturday 3rd July 2004 08:50


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Oh wow...that's just...wow. I cam here looking fo angst and ot it, but then all through the story I kept hoping for a happy ending. This was fantastic.
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Jedione
Friday 2nd July 2004 14:21


Forget Me Not
Great Job! You had me going at the beginning. Great story

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Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 2nd July 2004 13:41


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

Forget Me Not
Wow, that was... I was actually holding my breath! Thank you for the happy ending.

Well written, and a very interesting idea.

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Robert
Friday 2nd July 2004 04:33


Forget Me Not
Fantastic! A masterpiece of deception and a perfect ending! My choice for the winner.

Robert Owen
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St. Margarets
Thursday 1st July 2004 08:45


Forget Me Not
Oh that was wonderful. Ron was very in character as Ron-with-no-memory. Hermione's and Harry's devotion and frustration were both in character. At first I thought Ron was dead, but then the memory thing made such an interesting (and angst-filled) twist. The Weasley clock was a great throwaway line. There were lots of them in this story.
Ron losing his memory is such a nice nod to CoS where that almost happened to him. And having Peter inflicting it made the rat betrayal all the more poignant.
I'm glad Ron got his happy ending. Excellent story!
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Mr. Intel
Thursday 1st July 2004 07:32


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80

Forget Me Not
That was very touching. Awesome portrayal of Ron and Hermione. I loved how Ron came back slowly and how dilligent Harry and Hermione were in helping them. But most of all, I like how you didn't have them kiss. It wouldn't have been natural, but the hand holding was perfect.

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