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gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th September 2008 17:48
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
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| gymnastgal19
Saturday 13th October 2007 13:45
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| lol nice story i was wondering who they were gonna have harry look at... i thought that it would be ginny |
| pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 08:16
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| this was kind of a suprice I tought it would be Ginny he would run into not himself but it did make the story better. Loved it. |
| Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 06:12
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself , and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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| Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 06:12
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself , and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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| Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 06:12
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself , and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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| Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 06:07
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself , and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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| daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 5th June 2006 12:54
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| For a minute htere, I thought that Ginny was going to have Harry see her first. I like that he saw himself. It really helped. Good job! |
| levotatingT
Saturday 16th April 2005 13:44
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
That was really great, short and sweet, and it didn't go as I was expecting it to go, I thought ginny was going to be the first person that Harry saw, very clever,
Luved it, can't wait to read more!
levotatingT |
| bluejeanphoenix
Tuesday 30th November 2004 23:54
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| This is really interesting...I was so mad at them at first...like, how shallow could you be, to try adn fix Harry's problems with a love potion? But then the idea of having him see himself...it was actually quite touching that they'd want their friend to love himself...It's still kind of disturbing that they drugged him though. O.o Also, one thing wasn't clear for me - was he actually planning on killing himself? It was left sort of vague. Really interesting stuff. |
Jelsemium
Thursday 2nd December 2004 00:02 | Diseases Desperate Grown (Author Response) |
"Also, one thing wasn't clear for me - was he actually planning on killing himself? It was left sort of vague. Really interesting stuff."
Thanks for the review!
I intentionally left it vague, as it was mostly from Ginny, Ron and Hermione's POV. They were afraid that Harry was thinking of hurting himself because of his morbid interest in the rat poisons. But Harry wasn't seriously contemplating suicide. (Maybe some rat-icide, if he ever catches up to Wormtail.)
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| saugart
Friday 23rd July 2004 21:10
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 71 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
A pleasant tale.
I thoroughly enjoyed re-reading it.
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| Jedione
Wednesday 7th July 2004 13:40
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Very Clever! I would never have thought about using a love potion on one's self to get over depression. That was great!
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| Cera
Sunday 4th July 2004 12:13
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| Great idea with the mirror! I really liked this story... wonderful job! |
| Booky
Saturday 3rd July 2004 00:58
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Cool story!
U know, u could have a sequel 2 this. The first person Harry saw wann't actually himself, he was looking at a virtual image of himself, not a real one, so the first person he saw would be Ginny. He only felt like he didn't hate himself any more because he thought that the potion made him like himself. Get it? And u can say that they find out that the potion doesn't work on virtual images later on, in the book or something. N eveery1 knows GIn n Hayyr sort of r attracted 2 each other aldready,so the potion would work even better. Cool idea huh? YOu don't have 2 use it. |
| St. Margarets
Friday 2nd July 2004 17:43
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| Oh that was sweet with a great ending and a great message. Love potions are always associated with romantic love--what an interesting twist. You also did a good job with all the characterizations. Hermione and Ron were just right. Lovely. |
| Shriya
Friday 2nd July 2004 13:32
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*grin* you COMPLETELY had me going that the first person would be Ginny- I just had to chuckle when he saw the mirror, because it was just too perfect  loved it! |
| sunsethill
Friday 2nd July 2004 12:55
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| Nice, unexpected twist at the end. |
| Jeconais
Friday 2nd July 2004 06:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Now that, was a cute entry. I really liked what they did with the love potion.
Tim |
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Thursday 1st July 2004 23:39
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Nice twisty ending...and we all thought Ginny was making a BIG mistake
*grin
I loved it |
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