Oh, I can see Snape is asking for it . I hope Harry gets paired with Malfoy along the way, so he can get a little comeuppance too . I like the way Ginny teases Ron and Hermione .
Well, Snape has proven what a git and prat he is. Maybe Harry should contact the board of Governors on his own .
Oh man that was scary im glade harry got off it was so good. I cant wait to read more. Snape the slimy git should have gottan more. i cant belive he did that
Oh man...terrifying...but really....really...COOL! Oh man! And the tension between them comes to a head and it all goes to hell in a handbasket! Man, that was great! Whoa.
I'm sorry...weird reaction I know...but it was just so GOOD.
Nice teamwork between Ginny and Harry there. And Snape got what he deserved - yeah! Obviously DD's words when giving him the post did not have much of an effect.
Usually when I'm behind in a story I wait to review until the end . . . but I can't in this case.
Let's just say that I'm still angry on Harry's behalf. Your depiction
is wonderful, and I can't see straight I'm so angry at Snape. My praise
to the awesome author!
More to come on the overall story once I finish. But for now I can't
get my mind off that battle scene . . . I feel like I didn't read it,
but lived it through Harry's eyes.
I really like this story, its my favorite one out there. I'd like that stupid brat Joseph to get a lesson, and as for Snape, will his hate make it difficult to be loyal?
I really like this story, its my favorite one out there. I'd like that stupid brat Joseph to get a lesson, and as for Snape, will his hate make it difficult to be loyal?
I love your story. It's excellent! I can't wait for you to continue. You have a wonderful story so far and I love the Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry elements of your creation. Keep up the good work.
It is a pitty Snape lived. He has no honor. Thus he is a base animal, If I were Harry I would not feel an iota of remorse except I did not finish what I started.
To much Ron/Hermione, we know they are a couple and would be. Let us get to the good stuff. I want some Harry/Ginny romance!
It is a pitty Snape lived. He has no honor. Thus he is a base animal, If I were Harry I would not feel an iota of remorse except I did not finish what I started.
To much Ron/Hermione, we know they are a couple and would be. Let us get to the good stuff. I want some Harry/Ginny romance!
Wow. That was really, really good. The stuff with Hermione and Ron in the beginning was great, and I liked how Ginny and Harry teased them with feigned ignorance. The dueling matches were great; Hermione vs. Harry was really good with the illusion spell. Snape vs. Harry was chilling in its intensity, both verbal and physical. I like how Harry recognized the cutting curse from the Pensieve scene, and snarled about how he could only hit James with his back turned--calling him a rotten cheater. And then Snape couldn't reel in his own temper, so Harry bashed him to pieces. I really enjoyed seeing Snape get it all thrown back in his face. And Dumbledore at the end! Hilarious. But I think they both need to learn to control themselves, though, because it's not good where they're heading. Cool how Ginny came to make Harry feel a bit better when he was so angry. I'm eager to read your next chapter--keep up the great work!
Another wonderful chapter! The tournament was exciting and written very well. I love how Harry would have been able to press charges agains Snape. That should teach him a lesson. Of course Harry already did that during the duel. Though of course I kind of feel sorry for old Snivellus...
Anyways, this is a wonderful story and I can't wait until the next update!!
GO HARRY GO! GO HARRY GO!
STUPID
GIT
. I hope Harry 
along the way, so he can get a little comeuppance too 
. I like the way Ginny 
It's excellent! I can't wait for you to continue. You have a wonderful story so far and I love the Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry elements of your creation. Keep up the good work. 
