I really like the way you've expressed Ginny's concern for Harry. It seems very natural and genuine.
I also really like how you've showed the friendship between Ginny and Hermione. This is a relationship I've always found really interesting.
Arnel Wednesday 17th September 2008 18:12
1: Seeking Harry (Author Response)
There isn't enough Hermione/Ginny interaction in canon, so I decided to invent my own and explore how the girls became such good friends. I'm glad you like my approach. Thanks for reviewing.
Good chapter, nice setup, beautiful images at times. Can't wait for the other chapters -- Gin's a bit off though -- a little too quiet. And some of the dialogue is long speeches. That only happens in Jane
Austen novels. *wink* Here's to hoping this continues to get better and better - good work!