I like the pace of the story so far, and I really like that while the focus is on Harry, most of the action is centred on Ginny, Ron and Hermione. The second two in particular I'm glad to see are still heavily involved - I'm always disappointed when they seem to disappear from the scene once Ginny is involved.
Can't wait to read more : )
Arnel Wednesday 17th September 2008 22:17
2: Trouble in the Tower (Author Response)
I had a very smart beta when I started writing this story. The advice she gave me was that when there are multiple characters in a room, they all must interact. I tried to remember that when I wrote the scenes with Ginny, Ron and Hermione.
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for your review.
I like the pace of the story so far, and I really like that while the focus is on Harry, most of the action is centred on Ginny, Ro and Hermione. The second two in particular I'm glad to see are still heavily involved - I'm always disappointed when they seem to disappear from the scene once Ginny is involved.
Can't wait to read more : )
Arnel Wednesday 17th September 2008 22:19
2: Trouble in the Tower (Author Response)
Ron and Hermione are just as important to the development of the story and how Harry sees the world as Ginny, so they need their share of the limelight, so to speak.
Tisk tisk, Ron and Ginny learning off Fred and George. Well good on Fred and George for 'teaching' them a few tricks of the trade.
The Boss
Arnel Sunday 1st July 2007 05:25
2: Trouble in the Tower (Author Response)
Ron and Ginny have five older examples in their brothers and Fred and George are the most pestilential of the lot, so naturally Ron and Ginny will follow in their footsteps. Thanks for the review and the thumbs-up.
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