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WhiteWitch
Sunday 8th January 2006 22:07


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47

Chapter 1

I LOOOOOVED it!

 

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TigerLily8186
Wednesday 8th December 2004 22:38


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

Chapter 1

Oohh you quoted D.H. Lawrence... I've read a book by him, and I just got some more from the library. May I ask where this one is from?

Ohh L/J friction. That is always interesting. And yes, even though I am late starting this story, I am going to review each chapter.

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kaisa
Thursday 11th November 2004 13:42


Chapter 1
this is the first harry potter fan fic i've ever read, but i'm finding it fascinating. all i can say is i look forward to reading the next chapters. nice job. (i think) jeah
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Monday 27th September 2004 09:21


Chapter 1
  But is the title supposed to be natural "curse" or "curve"(like the quote)?

That's the fault of her silly beta (who would be, of course, me ). I've fixed it to the proper curve. Sorry Bella.

Hahhaah, I didn't even notice! Today is this first day I've even been to the site! That's fuuunny. Hmm. Kind of catchy, isn't it? Following the Natural Curse?

Okay, well, maybe not.



Bella
Monday 27th September 2004 09:21
Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Sorry, that was from me (Bella). I've never replied to a review before, so I'm trying to figure out how to do it!
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amhta
Saturday 25th September 2004 09:15


Chapter 1
I wasn't going to read this at first, because I hardly ever read MWPP-era stuff, but this is one of the best fics (including H/G) I've ever read! I was hooked from the beginning and everything seems so real and I can't WAIT for the next chapter!! Will it be soon? Please make it be soon!!
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Pineapple Queen
Saturday 25th September 2004 07:59


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43

Chapter 1
Sorry for the double review, but I just went onto your author page and noticed--you're the same Bella who wrote "The Story of Lily"? I read that story about two years ago and LOVED it! Now I'm looking forward to this story even more, and adding you to my email update list!

-Pineapple Queen, who is very, VERY happy.
Bella
Saturday 25th September 2004 07:59
Chapter 1 (Author Response)
I did indeed write "The Story of Lily"! I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope this one will be MILES better (I can't read SoL without wanting to barf because the grammar, spelling, etc. are TERRIBLE) and I'm glad you like it so far!
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Pineapple Queen
Saturday 25th September 2004 07:56


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43

Chapter 1
Love it! This looks like it's going to be a great Lily/James story, which are few and far between. The quote at the beginning was wonderful. =)
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Bring and Fly
Saturday 25th September 2004 05:24


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

Chapter 1
Quote:"I'm going to kill him."   "Who, James? I don't think that's-"

"No, Dumbledore."

A brilliant start to what promises us a rollercoaster ride. I don't think it matters that we know the outcome- James  Lily =  --I think the interest is in how you get us there.

Hoping for more soon.

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XiaoXiao
Saturday 25th September 2004 00:26


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158

Chapter 1
Such fun!  I like your explanation for their mutual dislike.  Very cute start.
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Sampu
Friday 24th September 2004 06:00


Chapter 1

 

  That was a very nice chapter indeed. Can't wait for the next one. Will the next chapters come as early as possible? Please? It would have been better if we could have a glimpse of Petunia's reaction.

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DailyProphetReporting
Thursday 23rd September 2004 23:51


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 180

Chapter 1
  But is the title supposed to be natural "curse" or "curve"(like the quote)?

That's the fault of her silly beta (who would be, of course, me ). I've fixed it to the proper curve. Sorry Bella.


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abalee
Thursday 23rd September 2004 20:22


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Chapter 1
 Very nice! More soon  - I like it.  But is the title supposed to be natural "curse" or "curve"(like the quote)?  Will you update soon? Please! I really am enjoying James/Lily, so it's a nice change!
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Stacey
Thursday 23rd September 2004 12:54


Chapter 1

Great! Please update soon!

I luv L/J stories, so hurry!

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