That was one of the most wonderfully emotional chapters I've read that doesn't involve a good snog or a sudden death.
As I'm reading these chapters, I can't help but wonder at where you're
going. Is it just a simple character analysis? Will all
this background information into the Weasleys get us somewhere?
Don't get me wrong, I love reading this, especially as it's giving me
all kids of ideas to improve my own stories. Like I said in my
last review, you've got a gift.
You really know how to describe characters and dig beneath the surface. I love how you keep everyone on character! I wonder, how many chapters wil there be? I enjoyed this chapter alot, and I look forward to the update!
You really know how to describe characters and dig beneath the surface. I love how you keep everyone on character! I wonder, how many chapters wil there be? I enjoyed this chapter alot, and I look forward to the update!
Hi! I usually review at SIYE, (which I will definetely continue to do), but I thought I'd drop in here to just reiterate how much this story moves me. Again, your titles are impeccable, and each chapter's contents are incredibly preceptive on your part. Well, I'll see you at SIYE! Great work, Laura!
Oh wow. I'm so impressed by your characterization of Charlie. I think that writers have a tendency to not distinguish enough between the 2 eldest Weasleys.. they seem to be the same person alot. I'm so glad that you made them different, and not perfect. Charlie has a temper, an awful one, but that makes him who he is. Ginny's right in that people often look at the outer image, and few are privy to the real person that's inside, those people often being family.
This fic is really great, and I can't wait for the next installment.
Wow! :yourock:
Another excellent chapter! :lol:
Christ, it feels like you're inside Jo's head or something :) (and that's saying a lot!).
I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Oh, just one more thing - you are going to write a chapter about Harry too, right? (After all, he is practically family :P)
Great job!!!
I love how you keep everyone on character! I wonder, how many chapters wil there be? I enjoyed this chapter alot, and I look forward to the update!
you are very good at charcterisations. I love the way you are going about this fic. Do keep posting ASAP.