Harry's mind was in Wormtail's body; it is not plausible that a mark on Wormtail's body would be applied to Harry's body; sorry, but it doesn't work and why is Voldie still able to get into Harry's mind (with his power occlumency should be ample; let alone the wards Dumbledore did at the end of the last book.
Good for Moody , though I'm not sure Harry, given his upbringing and all he's been through is really up to the task.
GryffRavHuffSlythendor Saturday 9th July 2005 23:30
2: Barbed Rain
I really enjoyed this chapter...although I am reading with a killer headache, lol. I really don't know what Harry could do more, unless Alastor Moody knows something more than he is supposed to know. I am really pleased that the font can get larger, a plus in my book, lol, easy on the eyes.
That's what I meant. Harry and Ginny kissed on the train which implies that they would be somewhat ... closer (?) than before. And here's Harry not even bothering to try and comfort her! I don't get that!
A storm was raging; the wind blew the world into submission as clouds covered the moon. Wonderfully descriptive line! Brought a shiver down my spine.
I am pretty sure I've read later chapters of this somewhere else... I have to say I read the first chapter and forgot to review. Apologies! Much as I disliked Percy in OotP, you made me feel more compassionate towards him and I felt the portrayal of numb shock from the other Weasleys was accurate. There are so many things you've mentioned in passing that I have more questions than answers. I like answers, so...
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