Oh, how sad. I really like the way you started out above talking about general groups, then moved down. It reminds me of another story I read at the hpgw_ficafest on LiveJournal. I'd really like to see how this progresses. Keep it up!
Cera Saturday 16th October 2004 01:08
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Thanks for the review! I never really thought about writing it that way, but I'm glad that's how it turned out.
Methinks you will need to explain what that curse does. Though I'm going to assume that its a FULL memory erase curse. She won't have any memory left will she?
Cera Friday 15th October 2004 07:44
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Well... chapter one should start to explain that, so I guess I should tell you to keep reading, it won't be long.
This is such an excellent start to a story!! You know I love it, I've told you that before, but this is an official review so I can even quote stuff!
I loved the imagery you have here:
It was a time of relief, a time of sadness and joy. The surviving members of the Order of the Phoenix slowly allowed hesitant smiles to cross their lips, smiles that hadn't been seen in almost a year.
And that you called Harry Ron's brother and you made me hate Draco all over again!
"She would no longer look upon her brother with affection, would no longer look upon the Boy Who Lived with love and yearning."
I'm really, completely, looking forward to you posting more!
Cera Friday 15th October 2004 05:40
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Ah Firl... thanks for the review! And there was no author's note, so I can thank you here for your awesome pre-beta-ness, and for helping with the title.
Thanks for all your suppose dude. I'd never be posting this if you hadn't helped and encouraged me.