woah. very good. I really like this, and I just hop ethat there will be a happy endoing. I know, I know, pathetic, but well, whatever. Please update soon!
Very interesting beginning. I wonder what really happened...
I had a crazy thought about what name could spark a meaning in her
Lilly Potter.. well and then there is of course the saner variant of
that thought that says Harry Potter.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next.
Keep up the great job and thanks for sharing.
Cera Monday 25th October 2004 00:53
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Thanks for the review Malaskor! In the next chapter, we'll see what happens with Harry.
I love this chapter. The Weasley's are completely in character, and that would be scary for anyone who doesn't know them, and meets them all at once. I was expecting the Matron to be a bit more like Madam Pomfrey, but she was kind and understanding rather than strict, so that was nice
My heart completely broke for Mrs. Weasley, and I'm sure it will break again for all the other Weasleys when we saw more from them.
Looking forward to moreDirl
Katie
Cera Sunday 24th October 2004 06:40
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Thanks Fude! I appreciate all the help and advice you've given me with this fic and I'm looking forward to getting more.
Interesting opening. Is Ginny going to be a blank slate or will anything of her personality remain? I would expect her to get angry in no short order with this situation and I wonder how she will react (or not!) to Harry, and how he will cope with this turn of events.
Since she cared about him, surely some spark remains? I'll have to wait and see!
BaF , hoping to have some more soon. I'm hooked.
Mar sin leat! (Bye for now!) Cara
Cera Saturday 23rd October 2004 03:25
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Thanks Cara! You've brought up some good points there. To let you know, our raven-haired friend will be making an appearance in Chapter2.
Great imagination of an amnesiac's thoughts. I wonder if she remembers anything ? Like magic, or how to read? She appears to be more coherent than Lockhart, anyway.
I can't wait to read more!
Cera Saturday 23rd October 2004 02:19
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Thank you so much. I was a little worried about writing someone with no memories. I'm glad that it turned out well.
As for whether she'll remember anything... *insert overused phrase*... Stay tuned!
Very nice start. I'm looking forward to how you are going to
proceed with this. I can see a few different directions you can
take this story, and all of them are worthwhile. This one has
made my "keep an eye out for list"
Cera Saturday 23rd October 2004 00:35
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Ohhh, I made your list! Thanks!
I agree, there are a lot of ways that this could be written. As much as I have a lot of it planned, I'm curious to see which way the story wants to go.
I'm hooked! You must post again soon because I really need to know what's going to happen...talk about cliffies...there are all kinds and the sneaky ones like this are the most intriguing to me. Poor Ginny...Malfoy was not very nice to her, was he? As for Ron and Harry, I'm interested in finding out what they do in retaliation.
and I'm looking forward to getting more. 
HUH?! WHAT WAS THAT?!?!
Wow... 
(The Boy Who Lives, anyone? 
)
indeed.