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gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 13:32


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

A Halloween to Remember
awww!!! I loved this!!! those robes were ingenuis!
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pyromain
Wednesday 12th September 2007 06:01


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

A Halloween to Remember
perfect, what more can I say.
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Ashley06
Thursday 29th December 2005 17:35


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 41

A Halloween to Remember

LOL that was hilarious!! Good job.

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Anonomous
Sunday 25th December 2005 21:52


A Halloween to Remember
I didn't like this story, it ended too quickly.  Keep Trying though.
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Sunday 5th December 2004 13:11


A Halloween to Remember
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Cera
Saturday 20th November 2004 14:14


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64

A Halloween to Remember

This was a really sweet, funny story!

My favourite line was,

"Ginny, I can't believe you punched that guy at the end!"

Heh.  Sure sounds like Ginny.  The prank was hilarious too.  The last costume being, of course, my favourite.

Well done!

melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:03
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it!  I actually borrowed the punch from my normally calm and mild mother-in-law.  She actually punched a guy that jumped out at her at a haunted house.  The family is STILL laughing about that one years after it happened!
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Stormdelver
Saturday 20th November 2004 10:54


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 116

A Halloween to Remember

Wonderful little story- I know it is a stand-alone- but it could be the beginning of a longer story as well- Oh well just pushing for anothor H/G fic. Love Snape's robes. Great story- consider at least a couple of more chapters- the "I love you" was very abrupt and without any lead in or out- needs a bit more explaination.

 

melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:05
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
I appreciate your comments.  I thought about the abrubtness of the "I love you" as I wrote it, but being the incurable romantic that I am, I decided to leave it in.
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brios
Friday 19th November 2004 18:58


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

A Halloween to Remember
 funny and sweet, the way I like them best. 
melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:06
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks - it's always nice to hear that someone enjoys your work!
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Antonia East
Thursday 18th November 2004 15:50


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 139

A Halloween to Remember
The changing costume was inspired, and the parcel from the twins was a nice touch.  'Is it a bird, is it a plane, no, it's SUPERSNAPE!
melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:07
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
I was rather proud of that scene myself.  It took me a bit longer to write that scene than some of the others because I was laughing so hard. 
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DADAGinny
Thursday 18th November 2004 12:35


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

A Halloween to Remember
That was great!  The prank on Snape was the best!  Hillarious!


melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:09
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks!  I thought of a few other costumes, too, but I decided that Snape couldn't handle more than that. 
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Bring and Fly
Thursday 18th November 2004 03:13


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

A Halloween to Remember

Other than the   +    =  ness ,(which I'm a sucker for!) I did enjoy    getting his come-uppance!!

I know I said I liked it when I first read it, but I'll say it again and I'm around for idea tossing when ever you like!

Cara         Baffy

melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:10
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks again for being such a fabulous Beta!    You were a tremendous help, and I look forward to sharing more stories with you in the future.
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Susie
Thursday 18th November 2004 01:54


A Halloween to Remember

Oh dear i'm so glad i wasn't drinking anything I LOVED IT please write more you truely have captured the charicters pretty wonderfully... i'm glad that Draco got it in the nose so to speak.

 

melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:15
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
That is a great compliment, and I truly appreciate it!  That whole taking a drink at the wrong time in a story actually happened to me as I was reading "This Means War!" by Jeconais.  It wasn't pretty, but that story is great.  You should read it if you haven't yet.
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XiaoXiao
Thursday 18th November 2004 00:01


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158

A Halloween to Remember
Very cute.  I especially liked the part where Snape turned into Harry!
melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:16
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks!  I knew that the Harry costume would be the one to send dear old Snape over the edge!
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Ima Quidditch Fan
Wednesday 17th November 2004 23:21


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

A Halloween to Remember
Very sweet, and quite funny!
melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:16
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks! 
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Robert Owen
Wednesday 17th November 2004 21:23


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 129

A Halloween to Remember

Huge guffaws!  Love the self transfiguring costume and Snape as Superman! 

 

Robert

melray1228
Friday 26th November 2004 20:17
A Halloween to Remember (Author Response)
Thanks!  When the idea for this story came to me, the costume was what arrived in my mind first.  I knew that I HAD to include it in the story.
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