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Dad
Friday 30th April 2010 10:40


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 499

Consequences
Unusual. A sort of sideways step from the "run of the mill" storyline. Excellent one shot!
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gymnastgal19
Monday 21st January 2008 18:12


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Consequences
nice story :p how come i knew that hermonie was gonna do that :p
the ending was really sad though... even if malfoy IS such a git :p
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LoonyMae
Monday 17th December 2007 19:44


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14

Consequences
I really like this one. I sent it to all my friends and they all love it! Fantabulus Job!!!!!
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lacyrachil
Monday 11th December 2006 12:13


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

Consequences
Wow. It was a myriad of emotions...almost erotic and powerful then sad and reproachful and unthinkable. Wow. Thanks for writing.
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Narumi
Saturday 9th July 2005 21:28


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 368

Consequences
wow. nice. i don't think i've ever read anything quite like it. you wrote the seduction scene quite well. hehe.
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flyawayflowergurl
Friday 3rd June 2005 15:13


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8

Consequences
aaaaaawwwwwwwwww!    that was so good. u need a sequel! yea, malfoy died, but it was sad why he died!
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levotatingT
Saturday 28th May 2005 09:50


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

Consequences

How sweet.  That is really sad though.  No expecting the Malfoy suicide.  It was definitly an eye opener, I liked it

Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back

levotatingT

Zelthian
Saturday 28th May 2005 09:52
Consequences (Author Response)
This was my first attempt at a darker fic. I'm glad you liked it.
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GinnyFan
Saturday 21st May 2005 00:39


Consequences
Brilliant =)
You stayed true to Hermione's character, yet got her to reveal everything in one fell blow to Malfoy's crotch 

I loved the flow of the story as well.

    Thank you!


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sonicdale
Friday 18th March 2005 11:10


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

Consequences
Beautiful.
I'm so glad to see some sparkling moments between Ron and Herm. Some fic writers get all caught up in H/G that they never see the very smurftastic romance JKR has going on in the background. Thanks for showing that.

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lonesome muggle
Sunday 5th December 2004 20:39


Consequences
wow..that was amazing! good job!
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Eressea
Thursday 2nd December 2004 21:40


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 46

Consequences
Augh!  Hermione and Malfoy!  Okay, once I got past that part, it was pretty good.  I was there waiting for Ron to hit Malfoy over the head with a shovel or something.  Very nice plot twist.  Rather interesting idea, about him commiting suicide and Hermione feeling guilty.  Great story!
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Shadow Hider
Saturday 27th November 2004 19:38


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

Consequences
oh wow. 
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Scruffy
Friday 26th November 2004 09:33


Consequences
This turned out to be so much better than what I expected I can't tell you. This was fantastic. The hatred, the love. In a way I can see it all in cannon. I bow down before a master!
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Nigel_Black
Thursday 25th November 2004 08:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

Consequences
man... you sure scared me for a moment... H/D? thank god it wasn't. good show of a person's guilty(in Hermy's case, no need) conscience
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Robert Owen
Thursday 25th November 2004 01:29


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 129

Consequences
Poor Draco!  Well, he got what he deserved in the end and a nice touch in that Hermione would feel bad about it.
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linchpinism
Wednesday 24th November 2004 22:30


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Consequences
hmmmm...i don't like the turn of events after hermione's encounter with malfoy. it's very....fanfiction-al. maybe that is the point?

the story was interesting, i can give you that.
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p0tterfan
Wednesday 24th November 2004 21:05


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

Consequences
Interesting one shot ... I don't particularly agree with the way characters behaved, but well written nonetheless.
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Rachel Newman
Wednesday 24th November 2004 20:21


Consequences
Well done; a brilliant story.
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