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Dad Friday 30th April 2010 10:40 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 464
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| Unusual. A sort of sideways step from the "run of the mill" storyline. Excellent one shot! |
| gymnastgal19 Monday 21st January 2008 18:12 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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nice story :p how come i knew that hermonie was gonna do that :p
the ending was really sad though... even if malfoy IS such a git :p
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| LoonyMae Monday 17th December 2007 19:44 1st year Num. of Reviews: 14
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I really like this one. I sent it to all my friends and they all love it! Fantabulus Job!!!!! |
| lacyrachil Monday 11th December 2006 12:13 6th year Num. of Reviews: 251
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| Wow. It was a myriad of emotions...almost erotic and powerful then sad and reproachful and unthinkable. Wow. Thanks for writing. |
| Narumi Saturday 9th July 2005 21:28 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 367
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| wow. nice. i don't think i've ever read anything quite like it. you wrote the seduction scene quite well. hehe. |
| flyawayflowergurl Friday 3rd June 2005 15:13 1st year Num. of Reviews: 8
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aaaaaawwwwwwwwww! that was so good. u need a sequel! yea, malfoy died, but it was sad why he died! |
| levotatingT Saturday 28th May 2005 09:50 4th year Num. of Reviews: 187
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How sweet. That is really sad though. No expecting the Malfoy suicide. It was definitly an eye opener, I liked it
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
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Zelthian Saturday 28th May 2005 09:52 | Consequences (Author Response) |
| This was my first attempt at a darker fic. I'm glad you liked it.
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| GinnyFan Saturday 21st May 2005 00:39
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Brilliant =)
You stayed true to Hermione's character, yet got her to reveal everything in one fell blow to Malfoy's crotch
I loved the flow of the story as well.
Thank you!
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| sonicdale Friday 18th March 2005 11:10 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 510
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Beautiful.
I'm so glad to see some sparkling moments between Ron and Herm. Some fic writers get all caught up in H/G that they never see the very smurftastic romance JKR has going on in the background. Thanks for showing that.
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| lonesome muggle Sunday 5th December 2004 20:39
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| wow..that was amazing! good job! |
| Eressea Thursday 2nd December 2004 21:40 1st year Num. of Reviews: 46
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| Augh! Hermione and Malfoy! Okay, once I got past that part, it was pretty good. I was there waiting for Ron to hit Malfoy over the head with a shovel or something. Very nice plot twist. Rather interesting idea, about him commiting suicide and Hermione feeling guilty. Great story! |
| Shadow Hider Saturday 27th November 2004 19:38 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 123
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| oh wow. |
| Scruffy Friday 26th November 2004 09:33
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| This turned out to be so much better than what I expected I can't tell you. This was fantastic. The hatred, the love. In a way I can see it all in cannon. I bow down before a master! |
| Nigel_Black Thursday 25th November 2004 08:11 1st year Num. of Reviews: 15
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| man... you sure scared me for a moment... H/D? thank god it wasn't. good show of a person's guilty(in Hermy's case, no need) conscience |
| Robert Owen Thursday 25th November 2004 01:29 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 129
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| Poor Draco! Well, he got what he deserved in the end and a nice touch in that Hermione would feel bad about it. |
| linchpinism Wednesday 24th November 2004 22:30 1st year Num. of Reviews: 5
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hmmmm...i don't like the turn of events after hermione's encounter with
malfoy. it's very....fanfiction-al. maybe that is the point?
the story was interesting, i can give you that.
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| p0tterfan Wednesday 24th November 2004 21:05 7th year Num. of Reviews: 337
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| Interesting one shot ... I don't particularly agree with the way characters behaved, but well written nonetheless.
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| Rachel Newman Wednesday 24th November 2004 20:21
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| Well done; a brilliant story. |
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