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Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 12:38


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 174

Prologue: Parental Pacts
I don't think they children or the mums are going to like this.
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gymnastgal19
Friday 2nd November 2007 19:47


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Prologue: Parental Pacts
wow! That is really interesting!
I dont think that James would really do that though...

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harrysnotgoingtodiein7
Wednesday 18th July 2007 15:47


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

Prologue: Parental Pacts
lol ... the question is will WANT to be married, or will they be forced into it

i cannot wait to find out
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Wooster
Monday 8th May 2006 05:44


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

Prologue: Parental Pacts
Gosh, I still LOVE this story. I'm rereading it for about the fifth time. If you'd told me a couple years ago that not only would I be reading fanfiction, but REreading it...well: it's a testimony to your amazing skill. Thanks for such an amazing story!
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ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 27th February 2006 20:00


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

Prologue: Parental Pacts
Very good job on this chapter. Way to keep me guessing. I am against arranged marriages but that was a creative way to make the arrangement and I couldn't have picked a better couple to wind up getting married (but not because they had to). If that even made sense. Hope you know what I meant.
Will be reading on and reviewing as I go!
Kortnee
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Baby Huey
Friday 16th September 2005 05:32


Prologue: Parental Pacts
I like it. the only proble that i saw was that Mr. Weasley was not a ember of the order of the phonix during the first war.
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Brian
Wednesday 17th August 2005 02:52


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Kind of a neat idea, I like the writing style as well. But for some reason the whole arranged marriage deal reminds me of the anime, Ranma 1/2. Not sure why...Maybe because there is a short firey-tempered redhead in that particular story as well. Even if that particular redhead is the (sometimes) male part in that arranged marriage. :)
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GryffRavHuffSlythendor
Sunday 24th July 2005 15:11


Prologue: Parental Pacts
Oh wow, I think this is a brill plot....more to come later
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Verdenia
Thursday 23rd June 2005 05:27


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Prologue: Parental Pacts
Wow, what a neat concept.  I really liked this chapter with the MWPP era happenings.  and, "go, arthur and james!"  Good job, boys...    
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harry'sgurl
Sunday 12th June 2005 16:58


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 33

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This is GREAT!!! I love any fan fic w/ G/H romance in it! This staory has a good beginning. I already love the whole story!

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HPNana
Monday 23rd May 2005 13:28


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23

Prologue: Parental Pacts

Hi there!

 

Taking a little break before I hit the books again. I have a Math test tomorrow and I think I need a break. This summer is not going to be fun.

Anyway, so far- so good. love the fact that you always include some humor in whatever chapter you are working. I could close my eyes and imagine the James and Arthur you describe. 

Got to go---going back to read the next chapter. Great Job!!!

HPNana

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Sunday 17th April 2005 20:28


Prologue: Parental Pacts
Nice beginning, I am confused though- why didn't they just cast the "counter-charm for the Anti-Apparation jinx" the first time they tried to apparate?
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scarlett488
Sunday 3rd April 2005 06:15


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Prologue: Parental Pacts

Found my way to this story from the Accio FanFiction nominations.

 

Two things struck me with the prologue.  One, you truly captured how much Harry was loved by his parents.  It made me sad, thinking of this little baby losing that.  Two, how fun it was to pair up James and Arthur.  Visions of Harry and Ron kept poking into my head as I read.  Great start. Off to read more.

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siobh007
Saturday 12th March 2005 08:01


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

Prologue: Parental Pacts
nice start..looks like it's going to be a nice fan fic...But one question, isn't Ron suppose to be older thaen Harry?
Mr. Intel
Saturday 12th March 2005 08:56
Prologue: Parental Pacts (Author Response)
Absolutely.  I'm a little confused as to why my story would make you think otherwise.
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Sassy
Wednesday 9th March 2005 09:07


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Ooooh. 
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will lunn
Friday 4th March 2005 20:32


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WOOOOOOOW

Micheal I have now finished reading it and i can say without any doubt that it my second equal favorite on the whole of pheonix song.

Can you please carry on with this story through the seventh year it would be fantastic to have someone brave enough to cover the final battle in full context.

 and  are great together and i thank you soo much for posting this wonderful "book" for us all to read it has been a pleasure to read and great plot!

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DADAGinny
Sunday 23rd January 2005 07:43


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

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Very interesting! Looking forward to more.


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Bunny
Tuesday 18th January 2005 05:33


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18

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Interesting concept.

I look forward to the rest

 Val

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Daisy again
Sunday 12th December 2004 07:24


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I assume Ginny was born late, cause if she was born before september, she'd be in Harry's year. Just a thought. 
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Daisy
Sunday 12th December 2004 07:23


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Wow, decent idea. My first time on Phoenix song, and I'm definitely returning. H&G rock, hehe... Funny emoticons... +  4eva.

Keep it up!

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