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Elvenlaughter
Monday 5th March 2007 14:14
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 88
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| This is so incredible beautiful! I've written a few drabbles about that scene, but that's an angle I hadn't considered. Poor Neville! I hope he comes into his own soon. He deserves to be appreciated too. |
| cara
Saturday 17th September 2005 20:09
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That was so beautifully done. That's always been the saddest part of OotP for me. I know Sirius dies, but that scene... and the wrapper... and Neville's mum...
And you just did it so well, and it was touching. This sounds so corny to say it was moving and I was fighting back tears and stuff, but it was and I was.
Wow. Just... wow. |
| chickymica
Tuesday 5th July 2005 00:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Wrapper |
Wow! This is the first time I've reviewed a HP fic, but I just had to let you know how much I loved this fic.
Short, but powerful, and a fantastically accurate characterisation of Neville.
I think this is a wonderful piece of writing. Well done |
| VanishingShmink
Friday 20th May 2005 17:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42 | Wrapper |
| This is so beautifully written and poignant. Poor Neville. |
| VanishingShmink
Friday 20th May 2005 17:10
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42 | Wrapper |
| This is so beautifully written and poignant. Poor Neville. |
| levotatingT
Friday 20th May 2005 13:31
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | Wrapper |
I think I have read this before, but I didn't review, I don't know why, it was a wonderful story. So touching, I like how Neville wasn't ashamed of his parents but of himself.
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT
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| Finduilas (of Dol Amroth)
Thursday 19th May 2005 03:37
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You know what, Calixa? I think that this was even more heart-rendering than JKR's chapter. You're a FANTASTIC writer, and always keep it up!
p.s. I think that once you put in an unnecessary word- I'm only nitpicking because you're so good that I hate having little things marr your work- but you wrote 'It didn't bother Neville that much when he presented both gifts to his parents and neither of them reacted'- the 'and' was unecessary. I'm just being an old fusspot here, so it doesn't really matter if you don't fix it or anything.
Please write more fanfics! They'll keep me alive until Half-Blood Prince comes out!!!! 57 whole days- longer, too, because I'll be in Malaysia when it comes out- for an entire week!- and it'll all be in Malaysian, which I can't read! PLEASE write more fics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Split Decision
Tuesday 17th May 2005 19:19
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25 | Wrapper |
Wow. I absolutely love your characterization of Neville. You've added so much incredible depth to his character in such a short fic, it's amazing, but you still integrated it all so nicely with canon.
"He turned away from the others and despised them a little, for having witnessed his shame all these years. He hated them a little for never knowing who he was."
That line, and, really, this whole fic, just made me ache for him... poor Neville.
I'm so glad the story of the week brought this to my attention. Thanks for a great story! |
| dancinginmagic
Tuesday 17th May 2005 08:24
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 166 | Wrapper |
Beautiful. Well done. |
| Antonia East
Monday 16th May 2005 08:44
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 139 | Wrapper |
*gulps*
Oh ... my. Beautifully written. The emotions are so clear
here, so well expressed. There was line upon line where Neville's
feeling were palpable, and you don't feel sorry for him, you feel angry
for him.
Stunning.
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| Muggle Witch
Monday 16th May 2005 08:18
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 118 | Wrapper |
| Well done. I really like the way you were able to bring Neville's emotions across.
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| cowputerlover
Monday 16th May 2005 07:42
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Wrapper |
*gulp.* that was a beautiful peice, beautifully written from neville's POV, and it was very good. please keep up the good work. thanks again for this short story |
| passionflower89
Monday 16th May 2005 04:37
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6 | Wrapper |
| Oh my goodness! So sweet, i feel so sorry for Neville, and i think you conveyed him marvellously in this story.. good work! I wish i could just give Neville a hug! Good fic. |
| tante
Wednesday 4th May 2005 20:11
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | Wrapper |
What an amazing character study!
I'm truly impressed and hard pressed to single out particular bits as the whole fic was wonderfully done. You've thought this out beautifully and I'm glad I read it. You've given me a good deal to think about Neville. Thanks! |
| Aggiebell
Tuesday 11th January 2005 20:36
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 101 | Wrapper |
I can't believe you don't have any reviews for this. Gah.
Absolutely one of my very favorite Neville-fics ever. It's just
so poignant and makes me want to give Neville a huge hug (while I'm
slapping Gran upside the head). I love how you include the bits
of canon and then expand on them, showing us how Neville reacts to the
situation. I think the inclusion of his petrification from PS is
brilliant--I can easily imagine him feeling "utterly stupid and
undeserving of those ten house points".
Thanks, Cali, for the inspiration to write more about Neville.
~Julie
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