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Wednesday 27th July 2005 05:06

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 646

A New Beginning
This is a nice ending to The Future's End.  I'm glad that the second time around, James' sending-off is happier than his first. 
Friday 8th April 2005 17:13

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

A New Beginning
Strange paradox you have to resolve in getting this scene across but you did it well. You can tell they are sad about loosing the son that just got on the train but happy about how they were able to raise him. Well you got the idea across better than I can explain .  Great job! 
Robert Owen
Wednesday 15th December 2004 13:01

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 129

A New Beginning

A touching end to this story, a bit bittersweet and a bit full of hope.




Antonia East
Wednesday 15th December 2004 07:02

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 139

A New Beginning
Okay...I am confused but intrigued.  Whose child is James? (I'm assuming H and G here, but at first I thought it was R and H)  How is time going over again?  What happened the first time?  Is Hermione dead (choke)?  Why does Ron need to get back to St Mungos?  Will you answer these questions in the next chapter?

Very interesting start.
Sorting Hat
Tuesday 28th December 2004 18:45
A New Beginning (Author Response)
Actually, this isn't a start. This is a missing moment from the story "The Future's End." If you read that, you'll understand. This outtake takes place after the final battle, but before the mirror scene.
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