Strange paradox you have to resolve in getting this scene across but you did it well. You can tell they are sad about loosing the son that just got on the train but happy about how they were able to raise him. Well you got the idea across better than I can explain . Great job!
Okay...I am confused but intrigued. Whose child is James? (I'm
assuming H and G here, but at first I thought it was R and H) How
is time going over again? What happened the first time? Is
Hermione dead (choke)? Why does Ron need to get back to St
Mungos? Will you answer these questions in the next chapter?
Very interesting start.
Sorting Hat Tuesday 28th December 2004 18:45
A New Beginning (Author Response)
Actually, this isn't a start. This is a missing moment from the story
"The Future's End." If you read that, you'll understand. This outtake
takes place after the final battle, but before the mirror scene.