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ionik27
Tuesday 6th April 2010 09:32
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 81
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| a beautiful story, even though i didn't read it with the right seasonal background! thank you for sharing it! |
| Astrid
Tuesday 30th September 2008 16:47
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Just a Little Smudged |
| Love it! All the little details are just wonderful. Good work! |
| gymnastgal19
Friday 21st March 2008 13:59
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Just a Little Smudged |
aww!!!!! I loved this!!! it was soo oo cute! cant wait to read ginny and harrys now
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| gymnastgal19
Thursday 8th November 2007 15:55
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Just a Little Smudged |
aww w!!!!! I love this!!! what a way to end a crappy day!
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| DebbieO
Monday 21st May 2007 11:34
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79 | Just a Little Smudged |
| So sweet. I love this. Thanks for sharing. |
| Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 24th April 2007 07:36
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Just a Little Smudged |
Great story. Really sweet  Ron seemed a bit ot of character- he was a bit too good with the fluff part. Otherwise, great story.
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| lacyrachil
Saturday 18th November 2006 19:43
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Just a Little Smudged |
| I'm glad you are practicing the romance part of your writing. It is very good and I'm impressed by the talent and thought you put into everything you write. I just finished reading the latest update to Cursed and can't wait for more of your writing. |
| Felix Felicis
Monday 11th September 2006 17:49
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | Just a Little Smudged |
What a wonderful, beautiful story! I love how well you described Hermione's feelings for Ron. She's at once concerned about how silly she is for helping him, and fearful of what might happen if he felt the same. Your internal dialogue is very well written. Although Ron rarely shows emotion like this, he is finally growing up and it's about time he realized how much Hermione means to him!
Their interaction is very much like it always was, but with an added level of feeling. The idea of Hermione getting a detention in Potions is too much fun, especially in defense of Ron, who didn't deserve her help in the first place. Ah, love does strange things to us, doesn't it? It clouds the vision to block out the unpleasent but brings the good more into focus.
I also have to say how much I liked the setting. I heartily agree with the peace and contentment that comes with watching the first snowfall of the season, and seeing the world become clean and new again. You described everything so well, I could really feel the scene in front of me. Loved it! Fabulous writing! |
| Novera
Friday 30th June 2006 12:30
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | Just a Little Smudged |
very sweet
i love it |
| GryffindorDragon
Thursday 22nd June 2006 07:10
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396 | Just a Little Smudged |
| Nice job!!! |
| Rainbow
Thursday 3rd November 2005 16:24
| Just a Little Smudged |
:) How sweet... I love Ron & Hermione as a couple, and this is just wonderful! Great job. +  &  +  Forever!! :) |
| HiddenFlame42
Friday 12th August 2005 03:52
| Just a Little Smudged |
OMG I almost died when I saw that your FF account was empty!! Hehe, but then I found this so all's good in the end. *sighs contentedly*
I really enjoyed this. As usual, you have captured the characters wonderfully and made an excellent story out of it. This was cute and fluffy and just down right adorable! I loved it. Excellent job Myth!! I'm gonna go see what else I can find on your account now...tata... |
| toadstool
Saturday 7th May 2005 15:26
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful characterization of Ron and Hermione, Hermione especially. Loved Harry's little comment. |
| Medievalist
Friday 18th February 2005 18:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Just a Little Smudged |
I've been reading here for a while, but haven't been reviewing (though
I realize now that I should). I thought I'd start with this
story, since it is the best short piece I've read. I could have
done with a bit less detail--about exactly what Ron was staring at,
early on, and later, about Professor Vector's condition. There
are, as well, a few grammar/punctuation issues.
That said, there are so many things to like. The descriptions of
Hermione's thoughts and memories, as when the snow begins to fall, are
insightful, allowing us to participate emotionally in Hermione's
impressions of the scenes described. In fact it is descriptions
of all sorts which make this piece so strong.
Also very nice is the attention to characterization. It's a
challenge to write Ron as both canonical and sensitive, and that's done
well here.
Best of all is the encounter in the snow. The beauty, the purity,
the innocence of the scene: "The wind swirled around them,
lifting snow from the ground and sending
it dancing back through the air, a thousand different stars against the
velvet of the night." Wonderful!
Thank you.
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| critmo
Tuesday 8th February 2005 03:37
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Just a Little Smudged |
| Nice fluff. |
| tante
Monday 24th January 2005 10:05
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | Just a Little Smudged |
Excellently done.
Poor Ron gets the short end of the stick so often. He's
frequently portrayed in such a stereotypically fearful or insensitive
light. It's nice to see the thoughtful, brave side of him
again.
Well written. I had the whole story playing across my mind in vivid pictures.
Thank you!
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| Eressea
Tuesday 11th January 2005 02:36
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 46 | Just a Little Smudged |
Awww.  It's so sweet. And original and realistic. I love it! |
| mary-v
Wednesday 5th January 2005 19:11
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494 | Just a Little Smudged |
 Wowwww!!!!!!!! This was absolutely brilliant! I really loved this! I m now off to read Just to Make you Smile.
~Maria~ |
| Estonian Chick
Wednesday 5th January 2005 05:40
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6 | Just a Little Smudged |
| Wonderful! Beatiful work. It gave me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside |
| XiaoXiao
Wednesday 5th January 2005 00:47
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158 | Just a Little Smudged |
| Very sweet. I loved Harry's observational skills--it added the perfect touch to that scene, and Ron was so sweet and romantic! |
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