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kopfsalat2000
Thursday 9th December 2010 14:45
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 114
| Just to Make You Smile |
so sweet...  |
| ionik27
Tuesday 6th April 2010 10:47
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 81 | Just to Make You Smile |
| another nice seasonal story! after i finished, i could almost imagine the Harry/Ron discussion about the Hogsmeade weekend... |
| Astrid
Tuesday 30th September 2008 16:59
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Just to Make You Smile |
| I want to find a boy like that. |
| gymnastgal19
Friday 21st March 2008 14:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Just to Make You Smile |
another cute story
wow! thats awesome that harry found lilly and james initials carved in the tree
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| topbabe
Saturday 2nd December 2006 04:56
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | Just to Make You Smile |
| aww this is so sweet i wish there woz another part to it! |
| TrainzStoffe
Friday 1st December 2006 15:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 19 | Just to Make You Smile |
Ah... \'tis lovely!
I\'m going to go all crazy, deep and metaphoric now, but somehow you\'ve captured the essence of the (first) snow. Not just in it\'s description and how it affects people, but in every part of the story, right up to the kiss. Wonderful! |
| lacyrachil
Saturday 18th November 2006 20:12
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Just to Make You Smile |
| Great romance story. The imagery, as always with your writing, was great. I really enjoyed reading this. |
| Felix Felicis
Monday 11th September 2006 17:59
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | Just to Make You Smile |
Yes, if anyone could show Harry how to enjoy snow it would be Ginny. I liked the progression you made from beginning to end. I can really see Harry as "I don't care at all about snow" and then as he enjoys it with Ginny he starts to understand. Her little bit of wisdom was great! It sounds just like something Mrs. Weasley would say - make sure that you have at least one thing to make each day a little bit special. The moment they admit each other as "that special moment" is heart-warming.
The description of Harry's internal monologue is well-written. He sounds just like his character in the books. The fluttering he feels around Ginny is very sweet. I especially liked the scene in the forest where he learns to look at snow as a clean, fresh start. I have a feeling that Ginny could make him see anything that way!
I enjoyed how you made Ginny clever and funny at the same time. At first I was a little concerned that she wasn't going to have time for Harry with her busy schedule, but you know those Weasley's... anything to go out in the snow.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is so easy to read, believable, enjoyable, and just makes me want to read more of your work! |
| acciobook
Friday 8th September 2006 11:30
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50 | Just to Make You Smile |
| This was so sweet, just lovely and romantic. |
| GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 15:08
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396 | Just to Make You Smile |
Very nice piece. A bit sentimental, but very well done.
Just to make her smile -- very touching. I also liked the part where Harry  finds the initials, but I think it would have been better if he'd have shared that with Ginny 
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| Novera
Friday 30th June 2006 12:17
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | Just to Make You Smile |
aww, so sweet, i just love it
LILLY EVENTS & JAMES POTTER SWEET,
sweet, very sweet
i love it |
| tta
Friday 20th January 2006 15:07
| Just to Make You Smile |
| This is incredibly cute. H/G, snow and a kiss, what more could you ask for? Nothing, really. :) |
| zoe_oe_oe
Sunday 15th January 2006 13:06
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Just to Make You Smile |
| Wonderful! You definitly should think of writing the story of how James
and Lilys initials got onto that tree. It would be the best. I love
this story and its companion.
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| HiddenFlame42
Friday 12th August 2005 04:10
| Just to Make You Smile |
*squeals so loudly her parents decided to take her to St Mungo's*
That was so cute!! A great companion piece to your other one and everyone again beautifully in character. Hey, you even convinced me that snow is a whole lot better than I thought! lol This was just so perfect, I can't think of anything else to say. Excellent work, as usual. Keep 'em coming!!! |
| toadstool
Saturday 7th May 2005 15:49
| Just to Make You Smile |
LOVED IT. Favourite bits:
"He shook the thoughts away. Christmas was weeks away, whereas breakfast was now. "
And this bit made me laugh out loud:
"Dean lay on his back in the thin layer of white, waving his arms and legs. Harry thought he looked like an utter prat."
My only complaint is that there should have been more resolution to the carving on the tree. It was a beautiful touch, but to have Harry brush it away, and not have it mentioned again ... I thought at the very least Ginny would have noticed it.
All in all I absolutely loved it. For some reason, I find it hard to find a good H/G fiction where Harry is in character, but in this he was just perfect.
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| BloodlessAce
Wednesday 2nd March 2005 10:41
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 24 | Just to Make You Smile |
great story. great   goodness.
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| critmo
Tuesday 8th February 2005 04:16
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Just to Make You Smile |
Very nice story, and I love this line:
'Shut up, Harry, and read your entrails.' |
| irish gal
Tuesday 25th January 2005 17:42
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 21 | Just to Make You Smile |
| (sigh!) how lovely! wish that was me in that kinda situation (altho is a bit too young for me...) |
| SillyGillie
Sunday 9th January 2005 16:21
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Just to Make You Smile |
LoL, by the by the first review from SillyGillie was from my sister |
| SillyGillie
Sunday 9th January 2005 16:20
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Just to Make You Smile |
Aw how adorable! I love Harry! He's just the sweetest guy ever! Too cute! Aww! |
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