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Wednesday 7th June 2006 05:30
Num. of Reviews: 50
|This is going to be fun...|
Monday 17th October 2005 11:22
I am enchanted , and looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation :)
My ONLY criticism, so to speak, is the use of the word "snapped" , which was used at least 8 times to explain a character's response to something. Other than that, I loved how the writing flows easily and makes the reader wish to continue and immerse oneself in this story :)
Thursday 13th January 2005 14:22
Num. of Reviews: 39
Wait . . . Hogwarts was around for about 400 years before the time of Merlin (I've been told Arthur and Merlin were about 400 C.E. and since Hogwarts was about 1000 years old in 1991--at least--then that makes the founding of Hogwarts somewhere around or before the year 91.). Why hadn't Merlin heard of it? And Godric Gryffindor would've been long dead by that time.
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Thursday 13th January 2005 19:45
|Two (Author Response)|
|An exact date for the founding of hogwarts was never given. It was only said to be "around 1000 years ago."|
I choose to put stock in the word "about"
And we have no concrete evidence for when Merlin or Arthur
existed either. Arthur is probably a mixture of a dozen or more men, if
Tuesday 11th January 2005 21:39
Num. of Reviews: 123
|this is good ^_^ |
Tuesday 11th January 2005 19:24
Num. of Reviews: 543
|Excellent chapter! Awesome Merlin is teaching Gryffindor! Too cool! Lancelot sounds really mean, as does Arthur *is sad* Brilliant! Post some more soon!|
Tuesday 11th January 2005 18:53
Num. of Reviews: 319
|Du Lac, eh? It reminds me of a certain Lord Farquad, lol. This story is intriguing; well done. |
Tuesday 11th January 2005 18:20
Num. of Reviews: 196
|Good story so far, I can't wait for more. Update when you can.|
Tuesday 11th January 2005 12:42
Num. of Reviews: 22
[Just before they left earshot of the king’s hall completely, Harry heard Merlin say, “That boy has strong blood. Young master Gryffindor would approve of him.”] I never thought untill now that Gryffindor and Merlin knew each other.
Tuesday 11th January 2005 11:22
Num. of Reviews: 494
This is great!!!!!! I really like this story!!!! I like where this story seems to be going! Well, please update really soon!
Tuesday 11th January 2005 01:04
Num. of Reviews: 129
Ah! the plot thickens and I suspect that Hermione's going to have some real problems adjusting to this era.
Tuesday 11th January 2005 00:14
Num. of Reviews: 337
|Gryffindor eh .... sounds promising. Looking forward to the fun journey ahead. So when does Ginerva meet Guinevere?
Monday 10th January 2005 17:33
Num. of Reviews: 25
Ahh... so Gryfindor is a protege of Merlin. Good Chapter!
Monday 10th January 2005 17:21
Num. of Reviews: 119
Oh my goodness! The Gryiffindor? How cool. I love this story, can't wait for an update!
This is my 50th review! Yea!
Monday 10th January 2005 11:30
Num. of Reviews: 31
|I don't usually like the 'time travel' fic but i think you are off to a great start. I have really enjoyed reading this so far. thanks, angie|
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