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Cirquedufreakfan
Friday 10th December 2010 08:14
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25
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I loved this story but there was a total lack of snogging :{) |
| pyromain
Thursday 21st June 2007 16:02
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | This Is Us |
| a real lovelly story of slow respectable love. |
| lacyrachil
Wednesday 6th December 2006 07:46
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | This Is Us |
| Perfect. I quite enjoyed the "realism" of the story. Thanks for writing. |
Bart
Wednesday 6th December 2006 09:59 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
Thank you for reviewing!  |
| Novera
Saturday 24th June 2006 15:52
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | This Is Us |
why BLODDY hell are you saying sorry
I LOVE it
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| levotatingT
Tuesday 14th June 2005 19:27
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | This Is Us |
That was so so so cute. I loved how Harry stopped Ginny from him, it really meant something and it made the story different from the others
great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Bart
Friday 17th June 2005 10:40 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, completly chuffed you liked and 'got' why
I didn't have them kiss, I was worried that the 'snog-happy' set would
hate it just because it didn't have one.
You can be assured though, that they both soon make up for it 
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| DADAGinny
Monday 13th June 2005 10:20
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277 | This Is Us |
Love how close Ginny and Harry are in this one before they are actually
"together". I've had a lot of male friends, and I can completely
identify with that closeness (that does turn into love for the right
person, like a certain Jedi...)
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Bart
Monday 13th June 2005 13:05 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
Yup,  & have been "together" much longer than they believe
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Tuesday 15th February 2005 19:33
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| roxypoxy
Sunday 30th January 2005 18:39
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13 | This Is Us |
very nice and mushy, though i got confused at the start , cos i thought they were more than friends .  |
Bart
Monday 31st January 2005 02:52 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it, don't be too worried about being confused
though, at the start of the story, they are very much 'more than
freinds' but have yet to admit it to themselves or each other.
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| tante
Thursday 27th January 2005 20:57
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | This Is Us |
| You know, one of the things I truly liked about this story was all the
feeling you packed into it, without relying on kissing. We have a
tendency, I think, to trivialize physical intimacy by making it too
common place. I'll admit, I first thought, "What's the big deal,
it's just a kiss. Why wait?" But my brain quickly moved on
to the possibility that that thought was indeed the problem. Well
done. Set yourself more challenges. I'm interested to read
more of them.
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Bart
Friday 28th January 2005 11:08 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it, one of the conventions og HP fluff seems to
be 'the kiss' I thought it would be more interesting to concentrate on
the emotions and feelings, so I'm happy that they came across,
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| Delani
Thursday 27th January 2005 20:46
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 319 | This Is Us |
Quite fantabulous! I'm sure that is my oversued word of the century, but it's true! This story is great! And I enjoyed your snog-less challenge; makes the story one out of 3.6 billion other ficlets on the web.  Well done!
Delani |
Bart
Friday 28th January 2005 11:05 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it
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| mary-v
Thursday 27th January 2005 16:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494 | This Is Us |
This is the one of the rare fics - that doesn't have them kiss- that was actually well done. So many others that I have read simply don't live up to what I expect. But this, this *sigh. It was perfect. I really enjoyed reading it, and I hope to read more soon! VERY soon!
~Maria~ |
Bart
Friday 28th January 2005 11:04 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
| Wow, thank-you very much glad you liked it!
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| critmo
Thursday 27th January 2005 06:29
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | This Is Us |
| It's a good story, but I don't quite understand what they're waiting for. |
Bart
Thursday 27th January 2005 13:11 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
It's a good story, but I don't quite understand what they're waiting for. First,
off I'm glad you enjoyed the story. As for why they are waiting... Well
they've been good freinds for a while, by the time this story takes
place, and they have just confessed their feelings for each other and
they want to bask in that moment for a while, besides they haven't even
been on a 'date' yet, and Harry's a gentleman and isn't the type to expect a snog on the first date, never mind before it.
As, Harry said, it's something to look forward to
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| juliet
Thursday 27th January 2005 02:06
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 303 | This Is Us |
Too much Kokopelli hey? Well if that means I get to read a well
written story, with great character development, then it isn't really a
bad thing. And they are better off not kissing anyway, they may
just end up chipping a tooth or something!
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Bart
Thursday 27th January 2005 13:05 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you like it
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| Allie Kiwi
Thursday 27th January 2005 00:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 40 | This Is Us |
I absolutely loved reading this story, especially where Harry fumbles for what to say and ends up rambling on and on. I hope someone writes him a speech for after he bumps off Voldemort, because impressive speaker he is not. Poor boy. But at least he has Ginny on his side now.
As always, I think you use brilliant descriptions to set the scene.
Ah, the commas.  Just imagine a darlek after them - 'exterminate, exterminate!'
Allie |
Bart
Thursday 27th January 2005 13:14 | This Is Us (Author Response) |
Thanks, Allie, I, personally, don't, see, anything, wrong, with, my, use, of, commas, but, hey, each, to his/her, own! 
Seriously, I'm cuffed you like it so much!
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