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QuidditchLover
Wednesday 16th January 2008 16:07
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79
| Not Enough |
| this was absolutly ADORABLE! |
| ILikeToRead2
Friday 11th January 2008 16:37
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30 | Not Enough |
| A very nice and powerful story - Thanks! |
| The Boss
Tuesday 13th November 2007 00:27
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214 | Not Enough |
Aww - so sweet. Lovely work here, hopefully there is more to come 
The Boss .gif) |
| pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 11:51
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Not Enough |
| this is PERFECT. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 12th February 2007 08:49
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Not Enough |
| Aww. That was cute. Stupid gits of brothers. And they sound so...mature. Like, they are Dumbledore's age or soemthing. But, I wouldn't have it any other way. |
| ninkenate
Monday 5th February 2007 10:46
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Not Enough |
| I was just thinking of this story a few days ago but couldn't remember the title or who wrote it. I found it again today when I was reading all your stories. Very curious. It's also curious that I reviewed this story almost two years ago exactly. I love this story and think it is one of the best pre-HBP one shots I have ever read. There is something about the emotions that draws the readers into it. Plus the determination of Harry and Ginny at the end lingers after the story is over. Awesome job. |
critmo
Tuesday 6th February 2007 09:48 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Curious, indeed. I'm glad you haven't changed your opinion about this story. It is my first published piece, and I'm still quite fond of it. |
| Felix Felicis
Monday 27th November 2006 16:19
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | Not Enough |
Beautiful story! I love the background behind Harry and Ginny's growing relationship, it's very insightful and makes the story just that much better. The shyness and insecurity of the two is shown very well throughout, along with their hidden desire to grow closer. You protrayed both characters just as they would be in canon but you gave them that wonderful description and feeling which makes a true fluffy story (and which is mostly absent from canon).
A wonderful story! I recall reading it sometime in the past and must beg forgiveness for not reviewing at the time. It certainly deserves a glowing review! |
critmo
Thursday 30th November 2006 00:13 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. This is the first of my stories that was published, and I'm still absurdly fond of it. It's nice to know that it's appreciated. |
| Believer
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 19:33
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 128 | Not Enough |
| This story was so inspiring! I loved Ginny's speech at the end where she tells her mother that she was too young to be possesed by Voldermort and never asked to be in this war, so how could they deny her what makes her happy. My heart did a little flip during that moment actually. Amazing job |
critmo
Thursday 30th November 2006 00:14 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. Yes, I was rather proud of that bit, when I wrote it. A little too mature, maybe, but I still like it. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 16th May 2006 15:54
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Not Enough |
| i love it |
| m4rk6
Thursday 8th December 2005 16:24
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 22 | Not Enough |
I must say, after slogging through parts of Per Asperissima Ad Astra, I was more than hesitant to read this and its prequel.
I was pleasantly surprised, the angst is still there, just a tad, but the characters felt right. Great story.
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critmo
Friday 9th December 2005 01:42 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Angst? Come on, not in this fic. - Glad you liked it, though. And as I said in answer to your other review, you ingored the title of "Per Asperissima" and missed the part you'd have liked. |
| amamama
Wednesday 10th August 2005 02:30
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 440 | Not Enough |
As always, one good thing leads to another. So, after reading
"Not A Good Mood", I decided I had to get some more of this fix.
And I absolutely love this. Your description of Arthur hiding his
firewhisky from Molly to have some to share with his grown-up sons was
just wonderful, and indeed a behaviour that feels canon. And all
the Harry-Ginny interaction... very well written! It's not easy
to find some privacy in a crowded house, especially when half of its
inhabitants are dead set on never giving you some time alone. It
worked out in a wonderful way.
Mrs Weasley, for once, recognised a power of will greater than her own. Yes! You show her, Harry!
Thanks! I really enjoyed myself.
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critmo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 03:54 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Glad to hear that, however, I think that it was rather Ginny's than Harry's power of will Mrs Weasley acknowledged there. |
| BasketKiwi
Tuesday 9th August 2005 19:01
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Not Enough |
 Perfect!! ...  |
critmo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 00:44 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
| jeanne
Thursday 16th June 2005 16:44
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | Not Enough |
| I loved their conversation,and Ginny stating that this "Love " was theirs an theirs alone .Love should be a private and precious feeling, and no-one else should be able to dictate the terms .You did this chapter so well,and I really liked it. It was a joy to read. "we,ll decide what we do,and when we do it". Good for them. |
critmo
Thursday 16th June 2005 23:47 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Usually reviewing seems to stop about 48 hrs after publication, and it's always nice to get reviews later. |
| Fuzzy
Saturday 4th June 2005 10:01
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111 | Not Enough |
| This truely fantastic, espessically(sp?) for a first fic. It's funny and sad and happy all at once. I don't know how you manage to do it, but you're one of the very rare few that can. Use your gift well. |
critmo
Monday 6th June 2005 00:23 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
Thank you, I feel immensely flattered.  |
| luka_black
Tuesday 31st May 2005 14:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10 | Not Enough |
Wow, I just read your fic, and itīs impressive, I just loved the way you just wrote about probably, the most reasonable way , between them, that they all would happen, it wouldnīt be planned and probably itīs one of the most realistic ways how your realize once you fall in love, I hope to keep reading more about your stories.
Cheers |
critmo
Wednesday 1st June 2005 00:23 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thanks for finding it realistic. That's high praise! - Take a look at my other stories here at PS: "Per Aspera ad Astra" is being published at the moment and there's a prequel to "Not Enough" called "Cracking the Shell". Please r/r. |
| ice princess
Friday 22nd April 2005 18:48
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6 | Not Enough |
So cute! A bit OOC, but I did like  's comments about being too young at the end. It's so true (and so sad)  .
Here's to keeping the great stories coming!  |
critmo
Tuesday 26th April 2005 00:48 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Oh, it's Ginny speaking at the end. |
| levotatingT
Saturday 16th April 2005 14:38
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | Not Enough |
I'm lost for words! That was BRILLIANT!
you should really write more, that was awsome, and even if it is just them at Hogwarts or at the Burrow it would be fantastic the way this story is! I loved the part when Harry and Ginny told the rest of the family.
Don't stop
levotatingT |
critmo
Monday 18th April 2005 00:24 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your enthusiastic support, but I'm afraid this story is finished. Time's running out for Post-OotP stories and there are still some more on my hard disk that need to be published. There's a new story called "Per aspera ad astra", and I hope it will be out soon. Look out for it and tell me what you think. |
| ohboehm
Friday 18th February 2005 20:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 11 | Not Enough |
I read this after reading your more recent story. This is very good indeed. It has the sincerity and actuality you showed in the "prequel" developed in a natural, and highly satisfactory, way.
By this time, we fans are (almost) as concerned for Harry and Ginny as we would be for our own real-people friends. Your stories have not only avoided the twisted ideas and downright nasty turns which some others have inflicted on Harry and on anybody and everybody else in the story-world, but also have shown a healthy wholeness coming into being in the lives which Harry and Ginny seem destined to share.
Love is willing the good of another (St. Thomas Aquinas): not just talk, but doing something about it. When Ginny takes the risk of going to get Harry, she ends by enabling Harry to care for her and so begins the process of healing for both of them. In the other review I remarked that we do not learn to love by loving; we learn to love by being loved. The only real love that Harry has experienced in his life lies far back in his infancy; and it is only the remnants of his parents' love---unconscious as Harry may be of this---that have kept his soul from complete despair. I do not think it a romantic myth that two who love one another are greater than themselves alone: I think it a reality and a special grace.
Thank you once again for your story---both parts are delightful! |
| tante
Thursday 17th February 2005 18:35
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | Not Enough |
I loved this - their choice of presents, the description of the picture, and their revelations in the snow. You pack a lot of emotion into your writing and I love that. I read your other piece before this one and now I see how that was a one-shot. So, ignore my pleas for more chapters.
Excellent work! Thanks! |
critmo
Friday 18th February 2005 00:58 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Ok. |
| mary-v
Thursday 17th February 2005 15:43
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494 | Not Enough |
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I- I mean WOWZERS!! This was just so - I LOVED this! Oh my GOD!!! I mean my heart is beating a mile a minute and I just feel like screaming like a madwoman, and hoping you don't think I'm a total freak. It's just that this AMAZING story stripped me of any normal vocabulary I might posess, and leaves me with only one thing: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !  I loved EVERYTHING about this! And the part where they where kissing in the snow  and when they confronted their family - and the part of Mr. Weasley sneaking away some firewhiskey to share with his sons was excellent and- hell EVERYTHING was amazing! (Sorry for the excessive use of smilies- they are to emphasize my point, and hey, they're cute!!!!! ) Well, I'll shut up now before I write an entire novel of nonsense, and BEG you to write more! YOU ARE AM A ZING! ACE!
~Maria~ |
critmo
Friday 18th February 2005 00:57 | Not Enough (Author Response) |
| Wow, Xmas comes early this year. :blushing: Thank you. |
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