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gymnastgal19
Friday 22nd August 2008 21:15
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
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| majolie
Friday 4th January 2008 18:53
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476 | Cracking the Shell |
| very good story - I look forward to reading more of your stuff. |
| pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 11:21
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Cracking the Shell |
| this is so good, but I do wonder will Harry get in trouble over Ginny's wandless magic, or will the know it was her and will she get in trouble? |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 12th February 2007 08:32
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Cracking the Shell |
| That was great. And Petunia was talking about Lily wasn't she?? Ginny is right. They all need eachother to survive this war. |
| ninkenate
Monday 5th February 2007 11:09
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Cracking the Shell |
| Wonderful addition to Not Enough. Seeing Ginny use wandless magic was priceless. That is one witch you don't mess with when she's on a mission. |
critmo
Tuesday 6th February 2007 12:10 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| No, you don't. Back then, I felt that "Not Enough" could do with a little more background, and I was quite certain that Ginny would be more confident of her feelings and that they wouldn't just jump each other, but take some time. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 16th May 2006 16:09
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Cracking the Shell |
| coolio i loved it |
| green_eyez
Thursday 24th November 2005 16:54
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10 | Cracking the Shell |
this better not be a one-shot!!!
be sure to update sooon, please???? i would love to read more.
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critmo
Monday 28th November 2005 01:52 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| It IS a one-shot. But fortunately it continues with Not Enough. |
| amamama
Wednesday 10th August 2005 02:49
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 440 | Cracking the Shell |
Oh, yes! This is definitely one way it could've been done.
Loved the way Ginny handled the Dursleys. What a wonderwoman she
is. Yes, I know, still a girl, but yet a woman.
Great! And kudos to your beta for getting the punctuation...
Thanks!
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critmo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 03:55 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| Well, thank you. |
| levotatingT
Saturday 16th April 2005 14:06
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | Cracking the Shell |
That was AWSOME you seriously have to write more, I know I say it to a lot of people but this time I really really men it. PLease !!!!!!!!! that is a really good lead you should really follow up.
levotatingT |
| Jimmyb
Saturday 19th February 2005 07:22
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Cracking the Shell |
I love the story, but wish you not said it was completed.
You are off to a great start with this story and keep writing.
And see were this story can go.
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critmo
Monday 21st February 2005 00:17 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| "Not enough" - that's where it's going. Please, r/r. |
| ohboehm
Friday 18th February 2005 19:55
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 11 | Cracking the Shell |
I like this story very much: it shows what loneliness and the mistaken idea that he must push all his friends away is liable to do to Harry, and it shows the real love and concern for Harry that Ginny holds in her heart.
We do not learn to love by loving; we learn to love by being loved. True, Sirius had displayed the love of a godfather for his godson, but this had been interfered with by Sirius' need to remain concealed from the Ministry, and was lost when Sirius fell through the arch. (Even if Sirius is to return, he hasn't yet, and Harry is pining away quite quickly.) What Ginny feels for him enables him to have worth enough to feel for her in return: these first steps may lead to fulfillment, happiness, and success in their mission---for Harry and Ginny together seem to foreshadow a power greater by far than the sum of their individualities.
Thank you again for your story! |
| dolphingirl79
Friday 18th February 2005 09:51
| Cracking the Shell |
| A really good story. and not mushy! yeah! I can't wait to read more stories from you! |
| XiaoXiao
Thursday 17th February 2005 22:20
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158 | Cracking the Shell |
| That was great. I love how Ginny told him exactly why they're perfect for each other, without actually confessing the depth of her feelings. |
critmo
Friday 18th February 2005 00:50 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| Well, I wanted to make it clear that this is still an open end situation. There's obviously a possibility ("Not enough") in the background, but as Dumbledore tells the Weasleys, Ginny doesn't want to see Harry as more than a friend at that time. Remember that there's still a lot to be cleared up, like the Dean-thing for example. Harry, too, is certainly not in shape for a relationship. Both of them need to heel - and that's what they need each other for first of all. |
| tante
Thursday 17th February 2005 18:15
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | Cracking the Shell |
This looks to be great. I can't wait for more. I loved how Ginny put the Dursleys in their place. Her description of the potential of her six brothers was wonderful.
This is well written and engaging. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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| fanficaddict
Thursday 17th February 2005 17:32
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Cracking the Shell |
| nice. :) |
| mary-v
Thursday 17th February 2005 15:11
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494 | Cracking the Shell |
 Ohhhh! This was simply... amazing! I was practically bawling my eyes out during that beautifull part in Harry's room, and I nearly wet myself laughing when Ginny went to the Dursleys! Well, I'm off to read the companion piece to this! Brilliant work!
~Maria~ |
| sunsethill
Thursday 17th February 2005 11:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | Cracking the Shell |
This was lovely. Understated but very moving. I hope you'll continue to explore how your Ginny and Harry relate after he gets to the Burrow.
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critmo
Friday 18th February 2005 00:42 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| Please, look at "Not Enough" for more. I don't think there will be more than that. |
| TigerLily8186
Thursday 17th February 2005 10:11
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97 | Cracking the Shell |
I loved Petunia's comment, "You're dead!" Lily and Ginny comparisions are such fun.
I enjoyed reading this. Your Ginny is quite perceptive.
~Meagan |
critmo
Friday 18th February 2005 00:39 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| I was in doubt if the reference was a little too cryptic, but didn't want to go into explaining either. Fortunately the experienced reader seems to know what to make of it. |
| Melindaleo
Thursday 17th February 2005 07:26
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 455 | Cracking the Shell |
This was wonderful! I loved it. I really loved the image of Ginny walking toward Harry as if he were a wounded animal. Wonderful imagery. I wanted to pop Dudley one when he scorned Harry's nightmares. Ginny was great in this one shot. I hope she really can help him heal. I think what drew me in the most was her thoughts...the fact that she did know he was really suffering.
I get so frustrated with the number of fics that have her snapping at him that everyone misses Sirius, not just him. It isn't the same coming from someone who is part of a family of nine, and I was so pleased to see a one shot that didn't do that. Really, really good. |
critmo
Thursday 17th February 2005 09:12 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. It's probably more likely that Harry must see for himself that others are suffering as well. We know he doesn't react too well to pressure. |
| DADAGinny
Thursday 17th February 2005 07:11
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277 | Cracking the Shell |
Loved the part where Petunia saw her and thought she was Lily.
That was great. And the part about all of Ginny's brothers was
great!
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critmo
Thursday 17th February 2005 09:08 | Cracking the Shell (Author Response) |
| Thank you. To be honest, I liked that part, too, but found it difficult to write, especially the charms Bill could use. I'm still not really satisfied with the latter part. |
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