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potters_love_redheads
Saturday 13th February 2010 12:19
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34
| First Dates |
Yes!! Hahah that was brilliant. Harry and Ginny set out to pair up Ron and Hermione, but instead it looks as if Ron and Hermione were planning to pair them up all along! Excellent story  |
| kash2210
Sunday 21st September 2008 15:22
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 172 | First Dates |
A very ejoyable story!  |
| everylittlething
Saturday 6th October 2007 04:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26 | First Dates |
ah you're great! i just read your fairy tale ending one and now this! i like your stories a lot. not sure if i can stay awake long enough to read the long one just now, but i'll have to make sure that i do that some time this week.
love the switcheroo with r/h /h/g, fantastic! and i love that harry sets of the wards in order to get ginny back for a kiss. great story! |
| LBJ
Tuesday 4th September 2007 19:48
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | First Dates |
| Harry would not have kissed her... |
| The Boss
Sunday 10th June 2007 03:43
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214 | First Dates |
Wow talk about a twist at the end! 
I love seeing Harry and Ginny get together and how different authors get them together. You have done a fine job of this
Overall I loved it! Keep up the good work.
The Boss .gif) |
| pyromain
Monday 4th June 2007 11:17
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | First Dates |
this is what I think is the way to get to harry, having a date without even knowing it en because of this trully enjoying it.
thanks for this wonderfull storry. |
| Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 24th April 2007 03:02
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | First Dates |
Really sweet.
Nice and . . . I dont know, but I sure did enjoyed it. Brilliant idea, to make Harry use the no-boys-allowed alarm system to get Ginny down.
Brilliant, brilliant, and. . . . . . . . BRILLIANT
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| Felix Felicis
Saturday 16th September 2006 07:44
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | First Dates |
| What a great tale of love between Harry and Ginny. I really enjoyed reading this. It was fun to see how you would have them slowly coming together and getting closer. Ginny is probably the only girl he could truly open up to like that. Your writing is very realistic in character and dialogue. The best part was the kiss at the end, what fun! |
| Gin Ovia
Tuesday 22nd November 2005 14:28
| First Dates |
| Oh wow, what a twist! That was perfect!! Very enjoyable. I loved the beginning; harry's discomfort outside the shop and Ginny's teasing (and the pink and white bag...funny funny). This was definately worth the read!! |
| wvchemteach
Friday 24th June 2005 10:38
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 168 | First Dates |
Well...first the bad...unless the Ron and Hermione fight was a set-up then you missed something key in OotP...they've cooled the bickering down...and Ron no longer goes after S.P.E.W. and Hermione no longer taunts him about Krum. After the kiss and the perfume...the two no longer go after the jugular like that.
Now the good...granted...I was leary of reading anything else by you after seeing what you've done in Adaptations...but I think that you handled both Harry and Ginny's character marvelously in this one. You didn't have Ginny leading poor clueless Harry around by the nose and you didn't have Harry and absolute fumbling moron like many like to portray. You didn't make Ginny into this in your face sex-kitten and you didn't make Harry a complete and total moody prat. In essense it seems you took what JK gave us and extrapolated to where they would be a few months later. I love good characterization and in this story at least you have it.
The events in the story were humorous and believable with Ginny shopping in the Lingerie store, nailing Malfoy and his goons, the two just talking and being silly together, the pouring of souls at the Shrieking Shack, the way they both didn't want things to end. Just wonderfully well done.
I have to admit after Adaptations I had vowed I would never read another story by you...but I'm glad I relented...I'll never read Adaptations...I just think you are going places there that the characters would never go and have seriously missed the characterization...but I will be open to giving future stories by you a chance based on this one and Fairy Tale Ending. |
| Muggle Witch
Wednesday 16th March 2005 15:51
| First Dates |
| Well Done.
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| Lady Ginny Potter
Friday 11th March 2005 11:57
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 53 | First Dates |
What a lovely twist! That was so great I never would have thought for this story you would have made Hermione and Ron get Harry and Ginny together. I it was just enought fluff to not make me puke.....actually no amount of fluff could make me puke. Anyway...I'm going to go see if you wrote anyother stories...keep up the brilliant writing!
Lady Ginny |
BJH
Saturday 12th March 2005 12:45 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| Well, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this and I hope you will enjoy Adaptations. BJH |
| emmamoonpotter
Wednesday 9th March 2005 07:49
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 68 | First Dates |
Wheee! Loved this story, but especially the ending. Wonderfully done! Bravo!
You can just feel the love!  
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BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:12 | First Dates (Author Response) |
You know, I do feel something, but I think it's just the asparragas yogurt I had for breakfast. |
| Suky
Tuesday 8th March 2005 21:15
| First Dates |
 +  =  .....that was adorable
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BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:11 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| Thanks. |
| Gnome
Tuesday 8th March 2005 02:30
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | First Dates |
| muahahaha! nice irony at the end...
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BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:10 | First Dates (Author Response) |
Without the irony my shirtsies would be all wrinkly. |
| Olivia
Sunday 6th March 2005 18:41
| First Dates |
Awesome story. I love how Ginny and Harry got together instead of the
intended Ron and Hermione. But somehow, I'm thinking that it was a
trick to get Harry with Ginny. Hermione and Ron were together all
along. That's too funny, cute, and conniving. Lovely! Brilliant!
Olivia
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BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:09 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| I kinda think the same thing. Hermione's idea and Ron's plan maybe? |
| Cole
Sunday 6th March 2005 18:21
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | First Dates |
Great story,
Nice twist at the end! It's good to read something by you, since we've been denied Chapter 18 of Adaptations for some time now, one of my all time favorite stories... And one I might add that I was afraid had been abandoned since the anouncement of Half Blood Prince, as has happened with other fics in the past when a new book is announced. So I was quite pleased to read your response to an earlier review that it is on it's way!
Anyways, a quite clever story, and I loved the end where Harry stepped on the stairway for the girls dormitory to get Ginny to slide back down to him, just like Harry to pull something out of his hat at the last second, to save the day... |
BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:08 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| I'm working on 18, I promise. I fully intend to have Adaptations completed before July. Glad you liked this little bunny too. |
| sunsethill
Sunday 6th March 2005 13:59
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23 | First Dates |
Very cute ending. I loved Harry triggering the slide and Ron and Hermione's high five. I actually, sorta, saw that one coming, but I enjoyed it anyway.  |
BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:07 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it wasn't a P.D. James surprise ending. |
| PottyMalf_13
Sunday 6th March 2005 12:35
| First Dates |
| OOOh I loved it!!! I just wish there was more. Bravo on the ending!! Great way to end, "And they lived Happily ever After" I can just see it.. hehe.. Love it! |
BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:06 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| There is a follow one to this one, it's called 'First Times' and it is DEFINITELY not suitable for PS. Whoo-hoo! It might be even too hot for me to type! |
| mollyweasley
Sunday 6th March 2005 12:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | First Dates |
 that's a really awesome twist, i loved it, very nice  |
BJH
Wednesday 9th March 2005 08:04 | First Dates (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like the twist. I thought it added a nice way to top off the story, like whipped cream on a sundae. BJH |
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