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Friday 1st January 2010 03:05

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
Saturday 25th March 2006 17:35

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
Excellent and thorough description of the Depatment, staff, resources, purpose, and history.
Sunday 13th March 2005 07:30

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 119

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
Interesting. I can't wait to see Ginny's reaction.
Saturday 12th March 2005 17:47

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 196

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
good chapter, I wonder what will be Ginny's reaction will be. keep up the good work.
Saturday 12th March 2005 15:28

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children

This was such an amazing chapter! I absolutely loved it to pieces!!!!! I hope that you'll update really soon!

(I usually write longer reviews, but my computer is on the fritz!)



Friday 11th March 2005 21:55

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children

Oh, this is going to be classic. A pregnant Ginny? And Harry shows up with another child? Oh, this explosion of temper will be nice. My wife and I just had our third -- and I can say with all diplomacy that you don't cross a pregnant woman by bringing her extra children to tend. Harry's in over his head. And I don't care if he is Harry Potter. Or maybe he has learned something after ten pregnancies....

Can't wait for the next chappie. Keep up the good work.

Shadow Hider
Friday 11th March 2005 15:24

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
this is really good!!
Friday 11th March 2005 14:48

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
I'd be intereting in learning how they ended up with all those children.
Emmeline Vance
Friday 11th March 2005 14:31

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
I really like it so far.  I love seeing Harry being so parental!  And I feel so bad for Bridget and she's so cute that I'm betting the rest of the family will welcome her.  Well, at least Ginny and the rest of the adults.  As for the children, I'm not positive what their reactions will be.  But I can't wait to find out!  Update soon, please!
Friday 11th March 2005 11:25

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 102

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
 Cute story so far!  Can't wait to see Gin's reaction to another rugrat under the roof.  Keep up the good work!
Friday 11th March 2005 08:31

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 71

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
I'm wondering -- is there actually such a phenomenon, as Parvati describes here?  I'm not familiar with it, but that's not really surprising given that I've never known a child who's been through such trauma.

When children go through such a catastrophic event, sometimes they bond or, in your case, latch on to the first kind parental figure they find.  The younger they are the tighter the bond, and she's very young.  If I were to force her to come with me she'd be even more traumatized than she is now, and may forever lose trust in adults or authority figures.

It's OK if there isn't such a phenomenon or if you're not sure.  This is basically a kind-hearted story, as I understand it, and it's OK to have as a conceit to base the rest of the story on.  I mean, the initial premise, that Harry would have eleven biological children with one woman, is rather silly.  (Certainly it happens, but even Molly only managed seven!)

I'm enjoying the tale.  I really like reading about Paternal!Harry.

Zahri Seb Melitor
Friday 11th March 2005 00:16

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
The Department of Orphaned Magical Children sounds like a very sensible setup. And I do love all the familiar faces populating its history and staff.

"Potter's Folly". Well, considering that he has 10 children, another on the way and Bridget, 'Folly' is probably a REALLY good name.

I'm placing internal bets on whether Ginny falls in love with Bridget or throws whatever is closest and heaviest at Harry. Or does both!
Thursday 10th March 2005 22:09

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 303

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
I really enjoy reading stories about Harry as an adult.  Maybe that is because I truly believe that he will defeat Voldermort, and want him to have a family with Ginny after.  It is difficult to believe that Harry would easily adapt to being a parent, and a good parent, considering the role models that he has had during his childhood.  Looking forward to more interaction between Harry, Ginny and their twelve children.
Thursday 10th March 2005 21:09

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children
Let's see what a pregnant mother's reaction to adopting a kid will be. :)
Thursday 10th March 2005 15:25

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9

2: The Department of Orphaned Magical Children

That was cruelly short! Very, very short! Come back and continue -- even though I have a good idea of the plot. I won't short, though, just in case some people are enjoying the ignorance. :-)

Bridget is adorable. I can just picture Harry and Ginny with a dozen children...priceless. What's another?

Cute fic. Do update soon!

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