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bookish327
Wednesday 13th August 2008 18:09
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 122
| Observing Harry |
Very interesting. You captured well the observational aspect of Hermione that we saw in the books. Thank you for writing this; it makes us all contemplate this moment from when things started to change for these four in an AU. In my book, a bit of extra contemplation is generally a good thing. Good job.  |
| majolie
Thursday 3rd January 2008 20:01
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476 | Observing Harry |
| That was so perfect. I really caught the mood of the whole thing. I wish there was more. |
| chiantiqueen
Thursday 20th December 2007 02:50
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Observing Harry |
Lovely! I really enjoyed reading a story from Hermione's POV for a change.  |
| Caroline
Monday 17th July 2006 18:08
| Observing Harry |
| Loved it! |
| keira azul
Tuesday 16th May 2006 07:31
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29 | Observing Harry |
| I liked this story a lot, it was sweet. Keep writing! |
| jiji
Sunday 30th April 2006 11:59
| Observing Harry |
 very nice |
| baby
Sunday 26th March 2006 05:54
| Observing Harry |
| i love it keep up the good work |
| sam
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 13:44
| Observing Harry |
that was pretty friggin awesome lol, write more... a lot more, i feel like i'm reading what would be between books six and seven that rowling probably wont touch on, but most of us want to read anyways..
write more puhlease |
| deathhour
Sunday 19th March 2006 14:09
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Observing Harry |
| i enjoyed this read, it seems like a very personal accout of event by Hermione. Well done, it adds a very warming persona to Hermione |
| Concealed
Thursday 16th March 2006 16:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30 | Observing Harry |
| Such a sweet, short story. Good job! |
| samantha
Wednesday 15th March 2006 18:54
| Observing Harry |
i like this. it has you hearing hermione's thoughts but at the same time without knowing it you are hearing harry's and ginny's too. love it and good job   |
| EmeraldPrincess
Saturday 11th March 2006 09:06
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131 | Observing Harry |
I'm not quite sure if Ive already reviewed for this fic, but girl (u r a girl right? u cud be a guy..), u made this story amazing!
I love it!!
Just out of question are u going to make like.. the same story in different points of view? Like Ginny, Harry, Ron, or Mrs. Weasly?
write more fics soon!
EmeraldPrincess |
| paladin
Friday 3rd March 2006 10:13
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Observing Harry |
Well, done! First person stories are great, because you can try and imagine the numerous conversations you have with yourself on a daily basis. In this case, reading Hermione's thoughts helped put me in the mood and feel what I think you were trying to capture for this scene. It starts out thoughtful and promising and then becomes subdued upon her reflection of their changing relationships. Then, you end with a note of promise, as they gather together as a quartet.
~Great job! |
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Friday 3rd March 2006 08:39
| Observing Harry |
| Yay!!! |
| ImmortalPhoenix
Thursday 2nd March 2006 17:03
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173 | Observing Harry |
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more from you in the future.
Kortnee |
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:15 | Observing Harry (Author Response) |
| I was planning on doing this scene from Ginny, Harry, and Ron's POV but it never came to be... I wrote Ginny's POV, but it truly wasn't very good. |
| me
Thursday 2nd March 2006 16:26
| Observing Harry |
| aww, that's sweet! |
| forever with dusk
Thursday 2nd March 2006 08:02
| Observing Harry |
| awwwww how cute! i'm clad it's not all overly sappy!! is it a oneshot? good job on it otherwise!!! |
| Ladybug
Wednesday 1st March 2006 18:44
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Observing Harry |
| What a sweet snapshot! I really felt I was right there with them, you evoked the scene beautifully. How gorgeous that Mrs Weasley just can’t be angry at Harry - I loved that! |
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:15 | Observing Harry (Author Response) |
| Hahah thanks so much! |
| ReachfulHP88
Wednesday 1st March 2006 13:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17 | Observing Harry |
| "His eyes would dart around the house looking for something – something I knew neither Ron nor I could fulfill." ah, how true! A lovely little fic, perfect emotion! I heart watching conversations! hahaha! nice work! |
| Amanda
Tuesday 28th February 2006 20:57
| Observing Harry |
This was very sweet ... I like how you never said what Harry and Ginny were talking about, it was left to speculation. You're a lovely writer! I have a question, though - I've just signed up an account here, and I haven't received my password in an e-mail yet. Should I go back and register again, or just wait? Does it normally take a few hours or something to get your password? Thanks!
Amanda |
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:16 | Observing Harry (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm not too sure about the password, but you can definetley ask one of the staff. |
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