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bookish327
Wednesday 13th August 2008 18:09


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 122

Observing Harry
Very interesting. You captured well the observational aspect of Hermione that we saw in the books. Thank you for writing this; it makes us all contemplate this moment from when things started to change for these four in an AU. In my book, a bit of extra contemplation is generally a good thing. Good job.
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majolie
Thursday 3rd January 2008 20:01


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476

Observing Harry
That was so perfect. I really caught the mood of the whole thing. I wish there was more.
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chiantiqueen
Thursday 20th December 2007 02:50


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Observing Harry
Lovely! I really enjoyed reading a story from Hermione's POV for a change.
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Caroline
Monday 17th July 2006 18:08


Observing Harry
Loved it!
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keira azul
Tuesday 16th May 2006 07:31


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

Observing Harry
I liked this story a lot, it was sweet. Keep writing!
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jiji
Sunday 30th April 2006 11:59


Observing Harry
very nice
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baby
Sunday 26th March 2006 05:54


Observing Harry
i love it keep up the good work
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sam
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 13:44


Observing Harry
that was pretty friggin awesome lol, write more... a lot more, i feel like i'm reading what would be between books six and seven that rowling probably wont touch on, but most of us want to read anyways..
write more puhlease
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deathhour
Sunday 19th March 2006 14:09


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Observing Harry
i enjoyed this read, it seems like a very personal accout of event by Hermione. Well done, it adds a very warming persona to Hermione
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Concealed
Thursday 16th March 2006 16:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

Observing Harry
Such a sweet, short story. Good job!
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samantha
Wednesday 15th March 2006 18:54


Observing Harry
i like this. it has you hearing hermione's thoughts but at the same time without knowing it you are hearing harry's and ginny's too. love it and good job
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EmeraldPrincess
Saturday 11th March 2006 09:06


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131

Observing Harry
I'm not quite sure if Ive already reviewed for this fic, but girl (u r a girl right? u cud be a guy..), u made this story amazing!

I love it!!

Just out of question are u going to make like.. the same story in different points of view? Like Ginny, Harry, Ron, or Mrs. Weasly?

write more fics soon!
EmeraldPrincess
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paladin
Friday 3rd March 2006 10:13


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Observing Harry
Well, done! First person stories are great, because you can try and imagine the numerous conversations you have with yourself on a daily basis. In this case, reading Hermione's thoughts helped put me in the mood and feel what I think you were trying to capture for this scene. It starts out thoughtful and promising and then becomes subdued upon her reflection of their changing relationships. Then, you end with a note of promise, as they gather together as a quartet.

~Great job!
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Friday 3rd March 2006 08:39


Observing Harry
Yay!!!
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ImmortalPhoenix
Thursday 2nd March 2006 17:03


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

Observing Harry
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more from you in the future.
Kortnee
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:15
Observing Harry (Author Response)
I was planning on doing this scene from Ginny, Harry, and Ron's POV but it never came to be... I wrote Ginny's POV, but it truly wasn't very good.
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me
Thursday 2nd March 2006 16:26


Observing Harry
aww, that's sweet!
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forever with dusk
Thursday 2nd March 2006 08:02


Observing Harry
awwwww how cute! i'm clad it's not all overly sappy!! is it a oneshot? good job on it otherwise!!!
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Ladybug
Wednesday 1st March 2006 18:44


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

Observing Harry
What a sweet snapshot! I really felt I was right there with them, you evoked the scene beautifully. How gorgeous that Mrs Weasley just can’t be angry at Harry - I loved that!
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:15
Observing Harry (Author Response)
Hahah thanks so much!
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ReachfulHP88
Wednesday 1st March 2006 13:25


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17

Observing Harry
"His eyes would dart around the house looking for something – something I knew neither Ron nor I could fulfill." ah, how true! A lovely little fic, perfect emotion! I heart watching conversations! hahaha! nice work!
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Amanda
Tuesday 28th February 2006 20:57


Observing Harry
This was very sweet ... I like how you never said what Harry and Ginny were talking about, it was left to speculation. You're a lovely writer! I have a question, though - I've just signed up an account here, and I haven't received my password in an e-mail yet. Should I go back and register again, or just wait? Does it normally take a few hours or something to get your password? Thanks!

Amanda
amhta
Friday 3rd March 2006 20:16
Observing Harry (Author Response)
Thanks! I'm not too sure about the password, but you can definetley ask one of the staff.
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