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Wednesday 17th August 2005 06:00

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

2: Names and Darkened Hallways

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Remus is just too cute!

I remember when I tried to tuck myself into bed the first time(went the same way Remus's went...).

Thursday 31st March 2005 08:47

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

2: Names and Darkened Hallways
LoL! How adorable, Remus is too cute. "Yes! Well, if you want to." LoL! Great job!
Thursday 31st March 2005 03:17

6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

2: Names and Darkened Hallways
How sweet.  I love how grown up you have him trying to be.

Split Decision
Wednesday 30th March 2005 09:05

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25

2: Names and Darkened Hallways

Cute story. I like your take on a young Remus, I've never seen it done before.

'Remus, you can ride the horse a bit later. It's time to eat,' his father said lifting his son off the saddle. 'I'll show you how to de-saddle him after dinner.' (quote from previous chapter)

Just a note, if you're going to continue with the horse, you may wish to brush up on some of your terms just to add to the authenticity. For example, one would say "unsaddle" or "untack" instead of "de-saddle". Just thought I'd point it out, I'm really picky about that stuff (as I am a rider)

Great story so far!

Wild Magelet
Tuesday 29th March 2005 21:04

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 115

2: Names and Darkened Hallways

'Yes. Well, goodnight,' Remus said, not moving an inch. 'Mum? You can continue to tuck me in and give me a glass of water, if you want. It wouldn't bother me.'

I love that line. Wonderful job!

Shadow Hider
Tuesday 29th March 2005 11:29

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

2: Names and Darkened Hallways

awwww chibi-Remus ^___^ this is great!


Tuesday 29th March 2005 06:14

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 196

2: Names and Darkened Hallways
 a young Remus, how interesting. I 'll be looking foward to your updates. keep up the good work!
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