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summergirl
Monday 23rd June 2014 07:05


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

1: The Right Question
good story
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Aqua Fountain*
Monday 26th February 2007 07:29


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132

1: The Right Question
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
James is probably, once he's recovered, ganna be like-

Brilliant

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misslara
Monday 11th July 2005 12:02


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18

1: The Right Question

I was looking for a good James/Lily story and it looks like I've found one! I know, I know, the sequels tell me Remus is the real focus of the story, but when it comes to something this well written I'm not one to split hairs.

In case that you didn't read between the lines there, I really like the setup of the story. I love the fact that's you've skipped the bit where James needed to 'deflate his head' and went straight for the bit where Lily decides to take pity on the poor guy. Sounds like he's going to need a lot more help to get it right huh? Well, I'm poised to find out.

So far:

Talk to you again after chapter 2.

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Muggle Witch
Monday 18th April 2005 13:14


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 118

1: The Right Question
That was so cute, well done!
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SillyGillie
Thursday 31st March 2005 13:13


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

1: The Right Question
Aw what an adorable story! James is so cute! "He looked like he was going to swoon" Too funny! Awesome! Ha just like Lily to give James a hard time about excepting her invite!
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p0tterfan
Wednesday 30th March 2005 19:45


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

1: The Right Question
Nice one shot :)  Looks like Moony knew what was going to happen beforehand?    
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