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Tuesday 26th May 2009 12:10

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 496

Part I
I have just read all of your stories with the exception of the unfinished W.I.P.

I do not know if you still read reviews and I suspect that you have given up on the W.I.P.

Your work gave me a lot of pleasure in reading it. Thank you!
Tuesday 26th May 2009 21:16
Part I (Author Response)
I do read reviews. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my stories!
keira azul
Saturday 20th May 2006 11:21

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

Part I
This is honestly one of the best H/G fics I have ever read (and I have read a lot ). Wonderful, keep up the good work.
Saturday 24th September 2005 20:11

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

Part I
Cute. I love everyone's characterization, really nicely done.
Thursday 14th April 2005 10:04

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

Part I

I just love 'Love Potion Gone Awry' stories.  They are usually quite hysterical.

I enjoyed how you have developed the story for now and so far the characters are in canon.  I really don't have any criticisms on your writing and I think you have done a great job so far.  Keep up the great work.



Wild Magelet
Tuesday 12th April 2005 23:57

Part I

This story has been on my top ten list of favourite H/G fics for a long time, so I'm really glad to see you posting it here on SIYE. I still absolutely love it. The characterisation is amazing, actually, and the H/G romantic angle is fantastic - I just wish JKR would take a hint from you! =)

"Potter, have you absolutely no imagination?

-Makes you wonder to what lengths Snape went to get a date."

Lol, sorry to quote one of your reviews rather than your story, but that made me laugh. And look at that scene entirely differently now!


Tuesday 12th April 2005 22:06

Part I
Great story continue to keep on writing fan fictions for you are great in showing the true character
Tuesday 12th April 2005 19:58

Part I
Sounds like a promising start to a good story.  I like how you're setting this up so far.  Will it be poor Ginny or poor Harry?  Or both get affected.  Hmmm....  Can't wait to see how this turns out! Should be exciting, and you write very well, btw.  I think your characterizations are spot on and you provide enough details to picture the scene.  Nicely done so far!
Tuesday 12th April 2005 18:49

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 22

Part I

Very expertly written. All of the characters are really quite canon! I like it a lot so far... Keep going! ; ) : D :)  

Tuesday 12th April 2005 09:26

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 196

Part I
You are off ti a good start, keep up the good work.
Tuesday 12th April 2005 07:26

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 170

Part I

I like the thought of Snape giving Harry the assignment to brew a love potion.  This ought to get interesting...

J Forias
Tuesday 12th April 2005 05:05

Part I

This was really good. Very well written. You've really got the Hogwarts atmosphere going. I'm not sure about Harry shortening Ginny's name to "Gin" - it is affectionate but for all we know thats because Harry's developed a secret alcohol problem.

"My name's Harry and I'm in love with Gin."

Sorry, ignore my attempts to be funny. It's just my personal opinion. I really love the character development that you've managed to do - it really feels like a year and a bit has passed since OotP.

dave gerecke
Tuesday 12th April 2005 00:48

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

Part I
Seems good, Will want to look at some more chapters. dave
Monday 11th April 2005 17:16

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 337

Part I
Interesting beginning to Part 1.  Let's see what part 2 bring.    
Monday 11th April 2005 15:03

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

Part I
Ooo, tis great! I hope mine gets accepted!
Monday 11th April 2005 14:39

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Part I

Ooh lovely beginning . . . and tantalizing little summary . . . I can't wait to see what happens next!

And Snape was nearly nice to Harry.  Interesting.

Penny Lane
Monday 11th April 2005 14:08

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 48

Part I

Oooooh, more please.

(This highly articulate, thoughtful review brought to you by Penny Lane.)

Monday 11th April 2005 11:57

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Part I

What fun!  This is terrific!  I just love the starting paragraph -- could practically picture Allan Rickman acting it out on screen!   Anyhow, I didn't have a chance to read this during the fic-a-fest, so I'm really looking forward to following along on this here. 

Thanks for sharing it with us here at PS!

Monday 11th April 2005 11:04

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 117

Part I

Has to be a way to work this into HPDD.

Potter, have you absolutely no imagination?

-Makes you wonder to what lengths Snape went to get a date.

Colin now stood a couple of inches taller than Harry

-Hard to imagine.  Of course he probably wasn't starved during his younger years.

Not a bad start.  Hope you update HPDD soon!


Ima Quidditch Fan
Monday 11th April 2005 09:52

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

Part I

I think it is funny that Colin is now taller than Harry.  It is pretty clear that Harry likes Ginny - my guess she misses it?   I love the idea of Harry being forced to make a love potion.  It was very smooth of Snape to come up with an Aurors use for the potion. 

Interesting start, looking forward to more.


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