Nice prologue...I can't wait to see more development. You kind of left
us hanging with the "Ron not being able to fly," but it's relatively
minor. Update soon!
EtreEstRever Wednesday 4th May 2005 21:21
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I'm debating on the true meaning of minor...depends, I guess. Won't say any more than that, and the next installment will be out soon.
I always have a problem with Harry disappearing off after finishing off
Voldemort without talking to anyone. Just seems really
uncharacteristic. But maybe there were more deeper reasons we'll
find out later?
Looking forward to Harry meeting his old acquaintances.
EtreEstRever Wednesday 4th May 2005 21:17
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Typically, if there aren't real reasons, that bugs me too. I hope you'll stick around to see the reasons.
I like it so far. Why is Harry back in England? What are Ginny's books about that makes Harry not able to read them? How come Ron can't fly? And what about the rest of the Weasleys? And why isn't Hermione working? And why don't I just stop asking questions that will probably be answered in future chapters? Okay. So you've got me hooked. Update soon please so I can get some answers. :)
EtreEstRever Wednesday 4th May 2005 21:16
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Questioning one, aren't you? That's good though...at least, I hope it is, as that's what I spend about fifty percent of my day doing. Not all your answers will be answered in chapter one, but maybe a few...
