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ibelieveintruelove
Tuesday 9th February 2010 22:18
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 257
| Scared |
Aww! I love it  Ron and Hermione are adorable. Nice job! |
| majolie
Friday 4th January 2008 18:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476 | Scared |
| Really lovely. Wish I'd been there. |
| pyromain
Sunday 15th July 2007 08:44
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Scared |
| so lovely Ron coming to terms with his feelings. I really like this version of Ron and Hermione coming to gether. |
| ninkenate
Monday 5th February 2007 09:49
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Scared |
| I'm really glad to see someone write an insightful Ron. I hate when others make him so truly daft that he couldn't find his way out of a paper bag without eating his way out. Ron is a great Chess player so he has to have some brains that he doesn't always display or use before he reacts occasionally. I like your version of Ron here and hope to see more of him. |
critmo
Tuesday 6th February 2007 07:57 | Scared (Author Response) |
| You'll love the end of "Moods" then. Promise. |
| lacyrachil
Thursday 7th December 2006 10:52
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Scared |
| Great job...I love this romantic Ron side. |
critmo
Thursday 7th December 2006 10:57 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Thank you. This was published quite a while ago, and I always tend to think that nobody reads the old stuff. So it's particularly nice to find out I'm wrong! |
| jessy
Saturday 20th May 2006 15:13
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 114 | Scared |
| great!!!! |
| cckeimig
Wednesday 17th May 2006 19:25
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406 | Scared |
| This was a lot of fun to read, in spite of the fear. Just a nice reflection from Ron and a nice way to get R and Hr together finally. |
critmo
Thursday 18th May 2006 04:49 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Hoho, take it slowly. They'd still be quite a distance from "finally" on this road. But they definitely made a leap here. |
| Connor Landon
Tuesday 16th May 2006 09:31
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188 | Scared |
| This is so cute! Everyone is posting cuteness today! I don't know what it is, but it's great! I'm in heaven!! Nice work! |
critmo
Tuesday 16th May 2006 09:42 | Scared (Author Response) |
| This was posted quite a while ago, I'm afraid. And if you want something else than cuteness, please, read "Per Asperissima Ad Astra". |
| EmeraldPrincess
Monday 15th May 2006 17:43
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131 | Scared |
Nicee
I like the way Ron is shown in this fic, hes sooo mature like Hermione says. |
critmo
Tuesday 16th May 2006 05:56 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Yes, he had a few nasty shocks. They were bound to have some effect. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 15th May 2006 14:06
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Scared |
that was really good.  |
| aschowin
Monday 15th May 2006 11:44
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136 | Scared |
| That was an enjoyable read. I really liked the focus of this story, and the way that it related the fear of the characters. Good job. |
critmo
Tuesday 16th May 2006 05:52 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much. The characters made it easy for me. |
| Evelyn
Monday 15th May 2006 05:12
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340 | Scared |
| This was sweet. I loved the ending. |
| Delani
Thursday 5th May 2005 15:59
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 319 | Scared |
"He still felt like a King." That line was...ahh, it was perfect! I loved the emotion in this (not to mention the *sigh* growing-up Ron). Well done !
del |
critmo
Tuesday 16th May 2006 05:51 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Yes, I thought this would be an appropriate line for Ron. Thanks for the praise. |
| jamadagni
Wednesday 4th May 2005 08:53
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15 | Scared |
| Very sweet. Excellent work. I haven't seen more of your creations. You really can write more such stories. :)
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| XiaoXiao
Wednesday 4th May 2005 06:40
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158 | Scared |
| Awww...that was lovely. Great job!
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| Thunder's Shadow
Wednesday 4th May 2005 03:46
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20 | Scared |
Absoulely and utterly priceless.. I love your writing, it's so interesting, and in this story you had me completely hooked in the second sentence of the second paragraph.
It's wonderfully original, as all the post-OotP "9 3/4 leaving scenes" are usually fluffy.. This is the way I imagined Ron and Hermione to part, and I loved the way Ron gave her a kiss on the cheek.
One thing that was off was the summary -- it didn't do the story justice... Though I have no idea what else you could put as a summary, I suggest you change it slightly, or... Yea.
Outstanding job, really.
signed,
Samantha |
critmo
Wednesday 4th May 2005 04:31 | Scared (Author Response) |
I really didn't want to make it too fluffy, that's true and therefore not more than a kiss on the cheek happens.
About the summary: I'm open for suggestions. I basically thought I could introduce the situation ... Ok, I'll add something to it, tell me what you think. |
| Ima Quidditch Fan
Tuesday 3rd May 2005 22:20
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195 | Scared |
| This was beautifully written... just lovely! |
critmo
Wednesday 4th May 2005 00:11 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot! |
| Arnel
Tuesday 3rd May 2005 22:15
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 573 | Scared |
I love this missing moment story. You show just how much Ron and Hermione have matured through their conversation and actions extremely well, especially when he tells her that it's her decision to go to Bulgaria if she wants to without complaining or making a nasty remark about it. Ron's honesty about not wanting to feel the things Harry does and how he shares his fears with Hermione in the aftermath of the Battle of the Department of Mysteries really got to me. Sentiments like these shouldn't have to be borne by people so young, but in reality, many people the world over are forced to feel just as he does and it scares me sometimes. I just hope that the trio survives the war intact.
This is extremely well written and certainly made me think! |
critmo
Wednesday 4th May 2005 00:10 | Scared (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I wanted to see what could be behind Ron's bickering. Most fics, including my own, understandibly focus on the hurts Harry received in OotP. However, the events at the Ministry must have been traumatic for the other ones as well and I think they could have been an eye-opener for Ron - at least where Hermione is concerned. |
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