Nice bit there with Sirius thinking James is cracking up and than pulling a prank . I was angry at Augusta at first, but then she apologized. I guess it fits with all she's gone through that she might snap like that.
angelmorph Wednesday 26th July 2006 03:24
Three (Author Response)
Thank you. Unfortunately, the incident with Augusta is part of a long string of such incidents, as I'm sure you realize by now...
Awkward, that. I hope nothing happens to Mrs. Longbottom!
I meant only that it was awkward that they had to have her introduce him to people all the time for him to be visible, and he's a KID who will want to make friends (as you show us with Colin). And you already addressed how horrible it makes him feel, so I was kind of just agreeing with the whole situation.
Awkward, that. I hope nothing happens to Mrs. Longbottom!
angelmorph Tuesday 9th May 2006 21:31
Three (Author Response)
Thank you for the reviews. Not sure what exactly you are refering to as awkward? I had no plans for anything to happen to Augusta but now that you mention it... perhaps in later chapters... certainly not for a while anyway... Angelmorph
I started reading this, and it's REALLY good, but it's just so hard to continue because of all these symbols in there...is there any way to get rid of them? I want to read your story!
great...just one thing to say though, it might only be a problem with my computer, but if it idn't would there be any ways of stopping all the strange smbols on he page...its kinda hard t read you sometimes..pity as it's well-written!
I like where this story is going. Your plot twists and turns are fascinating, especially the fact that Sirius can't see Neville because of the charm. OOOOH...this is getting GOOD!
angelmorph Friday 6th May 2005 05:00
Three (Author Response)
Thank you. I'm glad you find them facinating after all the editing and working through plot holes it all seems to feel uninspired to me as the writer. It's good to know that isn't entirely the case. I'm glad you enjoyed the manner in which I dealt with Sirius. It's a theme that will recur throughout the story. Thanks again.
Ha ha, "I'm Sirius"...Poor James
. I was angry at Augusta at first, but then she apologized. I guess it fits with all she's gone through that she might snap like that.
Angelmorph
AngelMorph