I love this story! Your Ginny is so believable- and my god- that Malfoy scene was so creepy ...
The broken part- my god that was great writing! When Ginny was upset and thinking about herself being tainted-- ive seen stories where the author tries to portray that feeling of Ginny- and you got it better than i have ever seen! Please update soon!!
emmamoonpotter Monday 9th May 2005 13:53
2: Hello (Author Response)
Thanks so much. Your review means a lot to me. It made me
I do try my best, but I couldn't have done such a good job without my
beta-ninkenate, my friend Muggle Witch and my sister xtrememama2001.
They have all helped me with my story to try and make it more
believable. There will be more to come, and Draco is even more
creepy. (Insert evil laugh here)
I find this a great start to the story - beginning with the usual post-nightmare meeting between our fav characters, and usually the sheep will be separated from the goats when it comes to writing the characterisation and post-nightmare conversation thereafter.
I'm still debating whether Harry might react this way - and my answer might be a tentative 'yes'. Despite realising Ginny's shared experience with Voldermort in the chamber, there's still an unstable, angry and grieving Harry Rowling has left us. Personally, I don't see anything wrong with the Ginny you've written, but I'm guessing that she could be a bit more short-tempered! ;-p Great to see her on a rocky start with Harry especially in her reaction to him in this chapter though.
More soon, I hope? Or is there perhaps another secret site where you have posted the whole story already?! ;-O
emmamoonpotter Monday 9th May 2005 06:54
2: Hello (Author Response)
Thank you for reviewing! Harry is very troubled and is not sure of
himself. He has lost Sirius and learned about the Prophecy all in one
fell swoop. I feel he is going to be a bit difficult. Things will be a
bit tense between Ginny and Harry for a few more chapters. I don't
believe in letting them fall into each others arms right away. That's
not realistic to me. Harry is going to have to earn her friendship.
There will be much more to come. My awesome beta, ninkenate, has my
next two chapters and we will get them up as soon as we can. I have 4
chapter posted right now at SIYE, and 2 chapters posted at
Wizardtales.net. I will repost the chapters at SIYE once I get caught
up here. Thanks again for your review, and I hope you enjoy the rest of
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