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gymnastgal19
Monday 21st April 2008 16:33


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

In My Eyes
im just wondering... wouldnt they know that the kids dad was harry potter... or does ginny use hermaiden name?? although i dont think that she would do that...
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gymnastgal19
Friday 30th November 2007 15:09


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

In My Eyes
i loved this! I thought that ginny or siruis would mention harry's name...
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lacyrachil
Monday 11th December 2006 05:46


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

In My Eyes
When Sirius finished, every eye in the hall was wet.

And that continues here. I read the previous story to this one and restrained myself but it is just so heart breaking to think of. I really hope that Harry and Ginny can have long, loving lives after book 7 - even if we can't follow it through JKR's words any longer. Thanks for writing!
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Novera
Saturday 24th June 2006 11:58


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157

In My Eyes
this made me really cry
i love the story but it would be better if
Harry was alive
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XXXmister-E werepony unit
Friday 10th February 2006 07:25


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

In My Eyes
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Fuzzy
Tuesday 21st June 2005 14:59


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

In My Eyes
This is the most heart-breaking piece of literature I've ever read. By the end of it tears were streaming down my face. You're a wonderful author, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise.
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Fuzzy
Tuesday 21st June 2005 14:59


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

In My Eyes
This is the most heart-breaking piece of literature I've ever read. By the end of it tears were streaming down my face. You're a wonderful author, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise.
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dophingirl79
Tuesday 10th May 2005 17:53


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 196

In My Eyes
good, but so sad. Bloody good story. Hardly a dry  eye in the house.
snowball
Tuesday 10th May 2005 22:14
In My Eyes (Author Response)
Thanks. Sorry it caused you sadness but then again, that was the effect I was hoping for...
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sherlyn
Tuesday 10th May 2005 03:00


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

In My Eyes
I liked this a lot, but the 2nd person POV didn't work for me.  I know you were probably using it to draw the reader in, but, for me, it had the opposite effect. Still, you do bring a certain pathos to your writing - in a positive sense.  You succeeded in evoking a sense of bittersweetness (if that is a word...) very well.
snowball
Tuesday 10th May 2005 12:46
In My Eyes (Author Response)
Thanks. I know the 2nd person POV is a bit confusig and I admit that I use it to draw readers. Nevertheless, I'm glad you feel the sense of bittersweet.
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brios
Tuesday 10th May 2005 01:39


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

In My Eyes

Beautiful, just beautiful.

 

snowball
Tuesday 10th May 2005 12:42
In My Eyes (Author Response)
Thank you
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EtreEstRever
Monday 9th May 2005 16:31


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9

In My Eyes
Awww...This came at the perfect time, too. For me, anyway. Very cute fic, even if the tense and POV was a little confusing. It was interesting regardless.
snowball
Monday 9th May 2005 19:07
In My Eyes (Author Response)
Thank you. I know the 2nd person voice is a bit confusing but it brings out the story.
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