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passion lily
Saturday 19th November 2005 02:17

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

1: Frustrated and Alone

Hi Sugarguill23!

I must say that you have a lot of talent. I have enjoyed this chapter very much! I also love how all of your characters are in...well, character. keep writing! Great job.                                                                                  

Sunday 20th November 2005 20:24
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)
Wow! Such wonderful praise! I'm glad that you find my characterizations true to canon. I hope you will continue to enjoy what you read in future chapters. Thanks for the great post!
Thursday 9th June 2005 06:39

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169

1: Frustrated and Alone

I love to explore dreams.  I've a psychology background and dreams have always fascinated me.  So, you've taken two of my fascinations and combined then into a really great piece of fiction. 

You express your ideas beautifully, Sugar.  I love reading your work and mulling it over. 

Thursday 9th June 2005 20:44
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)

Wonderful! I'm so glad we connected and that my story touches on your interests. Thank you for your helpful insights!

You keep me thinking and growing as an author.

Saturday 14th May 2005 20:35

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

1: Frustrated and Alone
Oooooh I am so intreged. You are setting up such a struggle. I can not wait to see where you take this since what you have is so well written.
Sunday 15th May 2005 07:47
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)
Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I'm glad that you are intrigued. It is my hope that chapter two will draw you even deeper into my story. Look for the next update on Thursday. Happy Reading!
Saturday 14th May 2005 15:50

5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210

1: Frustrated and Alone
I like it.  More please!
Sunday 15th May 2005 07:48
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)
Thanks for taking the time to post! Look for the next chapter to be up by Thursday. It's already in my beta's hands and ready to go. :)
Split Decision
Saturday 14th May 2005 12:53

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25

1: Frustrated and Alone
Great start, lots of promise. hmm... I wonder who the "young woman" is... lol. Can't wait to see how you resolve this.
Sunday 15th May 2005 07:49
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)
I'm happy you liked the beginning! The next chapter will be available very soon. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the post! I really appreciate reader feedback and have a personal commitment to respond to each one personally. :) I hope to hear from you again.
Been Reading
Thursday 12th May 2005 19:29

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

1: Frustrated and Alone
I enjoyed this story the first time I read it, and I'm sure I'll enjoy looking at it again since you've made some changes!  This was a wonderful start to your story!
Friday 13th May 2005 05:32
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)

Thanks for checking out the newly revised edition. :) The first chapter hasn't changed a lot, but chapter 2 has some new ideas. I hope you like it. Thanks for your post!

Muggle Witch
Thursday 12th May 2005 18:18

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 118

1: Frustrated and Alone
I have read this story on SIYE and really enjoy it. I am so glad to see you over here!
Friday 13th May 2005 05:34
1: Frustrated and Alone (Author Response)

I'm happy you like it! This version is going to be a bit different. I've started working with a couple of betas. I hope you like the changes I've made. Thanks for the warm welcome!!



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