"...sliding backwards until he could prop his chin on his wrist. "Hi, Ginny."
This was a great line. It was relaxed, letharigc, and natural.
Haha. I have to laugh at Hugh Jars, not related to the American Hugh Jass, by chance? This whole piece is so sleepy and shrouded in a boggling, yet almost visible, mist. The truth is so tangible, yet drowsy and jumbled; it's quite fantastic! The style meshes together perfectly with the plot.
Delani
Bring and Fly Tuesday 14th June 2005 01:45
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Thanks Delani! Yep, I think your Hugh Jass would be related to our Hugh Jars. I couldn't resist the temptation and I thank you for your kind comments on the fic.
This is pretty interesting. I'm enjoying it so far & really want to see what happens next. Update soon please!
Bring and Fly Tuesday 14th June 2005 01:41
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Thanks Lulabelle! I'm glad that you stopped by to tell me. Next chapter is about 70% and needs some explanations adding, so hopefully an update will be soon.
"Nice perfume! What did she do? Marinade herself in it and knock the poor sod unconscious?"
To be honest, this made my day.
Humbly I bow before you and your skilled depiction of sleep
deprivation, as well as what happens to sleep-deprived magical
youngsters.
*Yay&Cheer*
Bring and Fly Tuesday 14th June 2005 01:39
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Thanks Cornuthaum! As you have made mine for reading and pausing to review. Boy-talk doesn't come easily to me so I'm glad to have raised a smile with Dean's quip.
This is a really well done story. Esp. like the sleepy Harry
moments. Its done very well. So some implied H/G moments in
there. Hopefully Harry continues in this sleepy mode for a bit -
makes for some very interesting reading :)
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter!
Bring and Fly Friday 20th May 2005 02:59
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Thank you P0tterfan! Sleepy!Harry is fun to do. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Next chapter needs pruning into shape and then t'will be off to my superberous Beta.
I like the idea of Voldemort trying to use sleep deprivation to throw poor Harry off. He's acting like he's drunk, which is a hoot, but he needs more Ginny time.
I loved when he transfigured McGonagall. I think that would be Harry's exact reaction on being suddenly awoken.
Bring and Fly Friday 20th May 2005 02:53
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Thank you Melindaleo. Yep, Harry does get himself into some scrapes, doesn't he? Ginny is keeping an eye on him, as you'll see...
This whole piece is so sleepy and shrouded in a boggling, yet almost visible, mist. The truth is so tangible, yet drowsy and jumbled; it's quite fantastic! The style meshes together perfectly with the plot.
I couldn't resist the temptation and I thank you for your kind comments on the fic. 
And more h/g please! lol
