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adamstrage500 Thursday 14th May 2009 11:41 1st year Num. of Reviews: 3
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i loved it a very dark and devestational outlook on what could ahve been of the final battle |
| QuidditchLover Friday 9th November 2007 04:58 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 79
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| that was kinda morbid. emilygail0323@aol.com |
| pyromain Monday 25th June 2007 12:05 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 580
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| It is writen really good, but I didn't like the plot to depressing for me, I come here to leave the depression of life behind and now i find a story of life. |
| lacyrachil Tuesday 5th December 2006 12:59 6th year Num. of Reviews: 251
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| Very dark and poignant...I hope this isn't a foretelling of things to come. |
Bart Wednesday 6th December 2006 09:57 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Me too Glad you enjoyed it. |
| MagnoliaMama Sunday 15th January 2006 14:51 1st year Num. of Reviews: 33
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What a fascinating concept, for Voldemort to yank the magic out of everything close to him as a final act of hatred; I'd love to see that explored in a longer fic, examining the long-term consequences of his action (though maybe not with all the casualties, eh?). A very atmospheric and powerful story, if perhaps a wee bit on the depressing side.
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Bart Sunday 15th January 2006 15:15 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Casualties? What casualties? Dunno what you mean! 
But seriously I'm glad you liked it, it was interesting to write something other than fun & fluff.
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| SillyGillie Tuesday 18th October 2005 17:08 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 543
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| Really profound and sad. Nice job. |
Bart Wednesday 19th October 2005 08:12 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it.
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| Connor Landon Saturday 17th September 2005 16:52 4th year Num. of Reviews: 188
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| Wonderfully sad! |
| Kit Tuesday 12th July 2005 23:32
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Cheery thought for the day.
Good grief.
At least you warned me. But crimeny. |
Bart Wednesday 19th October 2005 08:12 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Whaaaaaaat? I thought it was nice and fluffy this one...
Or maybe not! Glad you liked it though, thanks.
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| Drie Monday 20th June 2005 09:41 1st year Num. of Reviews: 5
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| You're truly evil. Even though I was ready for a dark fic from you... Nicely done. I always enjoy your work, and so glad to see this story taking shape! |
Bart Monday 20th June 2005 14:13 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Me evil? don't know why you think that!
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| Thunder's Shadow Sunday 19th June 2005 10:53 1st year Num. of Reviews: 20
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::coughs::
Er, that was extremely, extremely good...But awfully depressing! Either way, though, it was wonderful. Great writing, really. signed, Sam |
Bart Sunday 19th June 2005 10:57 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Thanks glad you <strike>enjoyed</strike> liked it.
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| Kelleypen Sunday 19th June 2005 06:28 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 416
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| You poor morose author! I'll hope the good side of the HP force will reclaim you soon. Sending light energy your way------ |
Bart Sunday 19th June 2005 06:51 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
| Just ask Baffy, if she she thinks my fluffy side has been reclaimed - she's probably still pulling bits of candy-floss from between her teeth! - for refrence see a forthcoming outake in a couple of weeks. |
| Arnel Saturday 18th June 2005 23:36 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 573
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| I feel compelled to review this "cheery little number" just because I'm hoping Book 7 of canon doesn't end in quite this way. Poor Harry! Everybody he cares about dead except for Hermine and Molly. I hope they find him and he accepts their succor. You've done an admirable job of creating such a horrible end to Voldemort's reign of terror. |
Bart Sunday 19th June 2005 05:33 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
| Too right! I really do hope that JKR does nothing like this in book seven. As for Hermione and Molly, well they're both very determined ladies, I'm sure once they find him they won't let go until he's better. |
| NCDSbookworm Saturday 18th June 2005 18:02
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Ow.
That really hurt to read. I'm so close to crying right now.
You did an excellent job. Really, truly, superbly, astonishingly, painfully excellent. Keep it up. |
Bart Sunday 19th June 2005 05:29 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it, I was a bit worried how this would be recieved. |
| Delfino Saturday 18th June 2005 17:33 5th year Num. of Reviews: 238
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| Wow. I've never read anything that powerful. I love reading your stories but this one was....amazing. I've never heard the song before, but the way you wrote this.....Just...wow. It was so sad, but not that kind of frusterating sadness where you wonder what ever possessed the author to do this. It was the sadness that you realize that this could happen in the actual series. This is, by far, one of the best stories I have ever read. |
Bart Sunday 19th June 2005 05:26 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Wow, what can I say, that is praise indeed. Thank-you 
was so sad, but not that kind of frusterating sadness where you wonder what ever possessed the author to do this. It was the sadness that you realize that this could happen in the actual series.
I don't know about that... I've looked at the story a few times since I finished it and wondered where an earth it came from!!! |
| juliet Saturday 18th June 2005 16:20 7th year Num. of Reviews: 303
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| Well, that was certainly a cheery little read for a Sunday morning! Well written Bart - as always.
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Bart Saturday 18th June 2005 16:55 | The Good In Me Is Dead (Author Response) |
Thanks, I wasn't sure if I had over done the fluff myself...
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