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Reviews For Homecoming by Antonia East

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pyromain
Sunday 2nd September 2007 01:23


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Homecoming
I wish that the story was longer but still, I really loved it.
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critmo
Sunday 19th June 2005 21:33


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

Homecoming
Good story, works in itself, but still feels a little unfinished.
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Kelleypen
Sunday 19th June 2005 16:50


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Homecoming
powerful, amazing, beautiful--when you publish your own book, let me know,  I want an autographed copy.  You really are an amazing wordsmith and write with both beauty and pathos. 
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tante
Sunday 19th June 2005 08:09


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169

Homecoming

Lots of emotional detail to get the feeling of the scene, but just enough lack of physical detail to let one's mind fill in the gaps to one's own satisfaction.  Thanks for not trying to detail what Harry did to kill Voldemort, just that love was part of it and he suceeded.  I love seeing the moment from both Harry and Ginny's points of view. 

Another like this from Ron/Hermione's points of view might make an excellent companion piece.

Yet again and as always...

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