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KateB Wednesday 28th May 2008 22:14 1st year Num. of Reviews: 43
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| Thanks for this little look at Ron and Hermione. Very enjoyable! Will there be more? |
| gymnastgal19 Saturday 17th May 2008 12:42 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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| gymnastgal19 Saturday 12th January 2008 17:36 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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cute story.
i loved the ending
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| LoonyMae Monday 17th December 2007 20:00 1st year Num. of Reviews: 14
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SUPER CUTE!!! I really liked this one. Ron finaly realised what's good for him! Again loved it. |
| lacyrachil Monday 11th December 2006 09:50 6th year Num. of Reviews: 251
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Nice romance. I am an aspiring romance writer myself...nothing to date though. Very good writing. and are my favorite couple. |
| Gracie and Sarah Thursday 14th July 2005 15:41
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+ =LOVE!!!!!!!!!
Me: OMG! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUUTEEEE!!!!! AWWWWW!!!!!! oh man soy....you are so going to be a porn writer some day..."SLIDING onto his lap." teep! hahah woo. that was so good though oh man. that was SOOO CUTE! GAH!! but uhh....as far as the whole deepness and emotion ness about the war or w/e....i honestly had NO idea wtf you were talking about...but thats only cuz im an idiot slacker and STILL have not reread the 5th....god i SUCK!
but yeah....mucho mucho cute. they are going to get married. i swear.
love you! <3 groy
ps - browning is GOD!
Sarah: ah! yay for hermione/ron shippers!!!!! woot. they are so meant for eachother, its nuts!! and you are really talented. that was sooooo sweeeeeeet!!!!!!! it's about time for some serious romance in those books, i'd say.
wah! he's cool.
you rock!
<3, sarah
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tonks442 Thursday 14th July 2005 18:43 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| oooh thank ee. god gracie you need to get a move on and read it!! you
are so totally not going to understand the sixth book AT ALL. harhar.
yeah ron and hermione BELONG together. its fate. it has to be. yeah.
thanks for the review!
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| Heather Wednesday 6th July 2005 11:11
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+ = <3!!!!
That was SO CUTE my little soy baby! You are such a talented writer! If only this would actually happen in the series! I think you should combine your powers with jk rowling and you guys could write like, the best book ever! haha <3 you lots! I'm proud to call you my friend!
haha owl!
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tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:45 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Yes I will combine my powers with JKR and together we will write the
best book the world has ever seen! MWAH HA HA. J/k. Thanks for your
comments!
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| iviolinist Tuesday 5th July 2005 09:49 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 50
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| Ah, I just love a tale of good R/H fluff. This was a very cute story. I liked that they are both feeling the same helplessness when it comes to Harry, yet Ron is the one who firmly believes the best way to help is simply be there with Harry through it all. The image of the two of them having such a deep discussion while rocking on a swing just made me sigh with contentment. I love to swing when I take my students out for recess. It's so freeing - you can't help but let go of all your concerns when you soar through the air. No wonder Hermione was enjoying it so much. :) Very nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck! |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:48 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Yes, I always imagined Ron being very loyal and supportive (not that
Hermione isn't, she just would be feeling very helpless IMO). And
swinging is such a good release. So, I used the swing as the cutest
idea for putting Ron and Hermione together. And so I did it, and this
story is the outcome! Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed
it!
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| iviolinist Tuesday 5th July 2005 09:48 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 50
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| Ah, I just love a tale of good R/H fluff. This was a very cute story. I liked that they are both feeling the same helplessness when it comes to Harry, yet Ron is the one who firmly believes the best way to help is simply be there with Harry through it all. The image of the two of them having such a deep discussion while rocking on a swing just made me sigh with contentment. I love to swing when I take my students out for recess. It's so freeing - you can't help but let go of all your concerns when you soar through the air. No wonder Hermione was enjoying it so much. :) Very nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck! |
| shayna Tuesday 5th July 2005 07:58
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i like it!
sweet...... |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:49 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
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| shayna Tuesday 5th July 2005 07:58
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i like it!
sweet...... |
| snowball Tuesday 5th July 2005 01:57 1st year Num. of Reviews: 27
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| *Sniff* It was so sad, you had me in tears. Your English teacher is right, share more of your work with others. |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:50 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| I'm glad to have gotten an emotional response from you! Thanks for your support, and for reviewing!
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| Sassenach Sunday 3rd July 2005 08:08 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 52
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| This was a great fic. I love the sincerity and Ron truly seems grown up
by his words. I found it hilarious that Molly and Ginny had been
watching!! The swing growing small was a nice touch and good way to get
them together, literally!
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tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:51 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Thank you!
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| Britney Friday 1st July 2005 20:34
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hey
nice story...it would be so cool, sweet and romantic if this were so true...i have a feeling that Ron will tell Hermione the truth before school (hogwarts) lets out...this story was amazing....keep up the romantic stories of Ron and Hermione....its so sweet |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:52 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Sigh. I do hope it happens. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!
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| jeanne Friday 1st July 2005 11:03 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 508
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| I really liked this one ,also. A lovely combination of, some angst, seriousness, humor{swing charm running out,forcing Mione to sit on Rons lap, and them finally expressing their feelings over chocolate. Good fic.Not my favorite though. |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:53 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it, though it wasn't your favorite. Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me!
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| happyhornblower Friday 1st July 2005 01:32 1st year Num. of Reviews: 1
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| Great story! It was so sweet! I loved how Ron finally came to his senses. It was also very well written!
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tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:53 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Thank you! Yes, Ron certainly came to his senses! Thanks for reviewing!
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| Arnel Friday 1st July 2005 00:08 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 573
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This is a cute story and a commendable first attempt at romance fan fiction. I really liked the humorous part about the swing shaking off Hermione’s charm to send her into Ron’s arms. It looks as if he has finally realized she is a girl and is acting on his instincts! By the way, I agree with Molly that the swing was left out there for an express purpose. I enjoyed reading this story a lot. |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:55 | The Swing (Author Response) |
It looks as if he has finally realized she is a girl and is acting on his instincts!
Yes it certainly does! Thank you for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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| whitestag Thursday 30th June 2005 23:15 1st year Num. of Reviews: 41
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| Definitely my favorite of the lot! I love the tenderness and simplicity of the whole story, and how Ron's sensitivity finally comes out. It was all so vivid; I could see it all happening plain as day. Great job! |
tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:56 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Thank you!
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| Ebola_the_Virus Thursday 30th June 2005 17:11 1st year Num. of Reviews: 1
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Sahar. This is the epidemy of great.
Bloody Brilliant. They need to put this in one of the movies...
I seriously got the chills reading it. lol
I LOVE YOU!
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tonks442 Thursday 7th July 2005 20:56 | The Swing (Author Response) |
| Har har, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
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| Thursday 30th June 2005 17:02
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This was bloody brilliant!!!
It makes me all warm inside and makes me smile1!!
I love you sooyy!!!!
<333Eb |
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