Very nice; well-written. I've not had the dubious pleasure of
being on the receiving end of the hormones of a woman who is in labor,
but what you wrote is believable to me. I dod see one small
error, I think:
After the pain past -> After the pain passed
melray1228 Tuesday 28th June 2005 16:51
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)
Thanks! My husband would tell you that being on the receiving end of those hormones isn't fun, but I can tell you as a woman that has had two babies that labor isn't exactly a walk in the park either. Seeing those beautiful faces though makes it all worthwhile!
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