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gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 09:44


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!
whats wrong?!?!
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brios
Friday 24th June 2005 12:39


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!

Ahhh shameful cliffie!! How could you? 

great story, looking forward to next installment.

 

melray1228
Tuesday 28th June 2005 12:53
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)
There's more coming!  Ch. 4 is in beta and should be up soon.  Thanks for reading!
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jeanne
Friday 24th June 2005 12:02


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!
This was so short,but good,but short.
melray1228
Tuesday 28th June 2005 12:54
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  There's more coming.

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tbouloy
Thursday 23rd June 2005 23:10


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!
Great Story! Keep the updates coming.
melray1228
Tuesday 28th June 2005 12:52
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)
Thanks!
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Wolf's Scream
Thursday 23rd June 2005 09:55


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 372

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!
Very nice; well-written.  I've not had the dubious pleasure of being on the receiving end of the hormones of a woman who is in labor, but what you wrote is believable to me.  I dod see one small error, I think:

After the pain past -> After the pain passed

melray1228
Tuesday 28th June 2005 12:51
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)
Thanks!  My husband would tell you that being on the receiving end of those hormones isn't fun, but I can tell you as a woman that has had two babies that labor isn't exactly a walk in the park either.  Seeing those beautiful faces though makes it all worthwhile!
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J.R. Lewis
Thursday 23rd June 2005 08:26


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 126

Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter!
Ooo... Leave us hanging, huh. :)  I'll be waiting.

Good job. Keep at it. Nice change from the OotP stuff.

melray1228
Tuesday 28th June 2005 12:52
Chapter 2: This is all your fault, Potter! (Author Response)
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I can promise that this won't be the last cliffhanger!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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